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 Posted: Fri Jan 27th, 2006 11:59 pm
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Still needs a 3rd verse and bridge


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 Posted: Sat Jan 28th, 2006 12:04 am
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ahhh...likey...likey....I love how you sang the "I" part....really added something....can you post the lyric??



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 Posted: Sat Jan 28th, 2006 12:07 am
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Sure, I'll get them up sometime tomorrow. If anyone has an idea for a 3rd verse let me know

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 Posted: Sat Jan 28th, 2006 12:27 am
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No.....now.....LOL  I figured you'd be out playin' tonight...oh that's right...your chillin' workin' on your "stuff"  btw...was this done recently?? What motivates you to write your lyrics...your muse?? Do I dare ask?? lol

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 Posted: Sat Jan 28th, 2006 12:41 am
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Stop this, I can't keep up!

I think I have the piano down HA! for Leave the Light On.

Don't toy with me....

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 Posted: Sat Jan 28th, 2006 10:38 am
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That's awsome!

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 Posted: Sat Jan 28th, 2006 11:20 am
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Sean, my man! This is excellent stuff! :D :D :D :D!!!!

I think the music drives this piece, brilliant solo too.  What is the time on this? You could just go back to the chorus and call it done as far as I'm concerned.

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 Posted: Sat Jan 28th, 2006 11:29 am
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It clocks at 4:07  I think. I'm really thinking about doing that. Thanks for the kind words Mike:cool:

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Crystal Lynn wrote: No.....now.....LOL  I figured you'd be out playin' tonight...oh that's right...your chillin' workin' on your "stuff"  btw...was this done recently?? What motivates you to write your lyrics...your muse?? Do I dare ask?? lol
 

The song has been in pieces for a week or so and I glued it together last night. I wrote "Leave the light on" after watching the movie Van Helsing. It's just about a man fighting his monsters and demons because he wants to be better for the woman he loves.

Train of Fools is just an observation of how wimpy we as a people are getting. It drives me nuts when I see so many people that have no confidence in who they are. I believe everyone has one thing that they can be great at, the hard part is finding out what.

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 Posted: Sat Jan 28th, 2006 11:58 am
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Kinda like that movie, City Slickers:

Jack Palance:  "Do you know what the secret of life is?  One thing.  Just one thing.  You stick to that and everything else don't mean ***."


Billy Crystal:  "Yeah, but what's that one thing?"


Jack Palance:  "That's what you've got to figure out."



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 Posted: Sat Jan 28th, 2006 12:00 pm
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That's it my man.

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 Posted: Sat Jan 28th, 2006 12:55 pm
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Train of Fools is just an observation of how wimpy we as a people are getting. It drives me nuts when I see so many people that have no confidence in who they are. I believe everyone has one thing that they can be great at, the hard part is finding out what.


Sean, I will try to be more confident......I never been a wimp at anything else in my life.....so no need to start now my freind....thanks for the wake-up call......

 



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 Posted: Sat Jan 28th, 2006 12:59 pm
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Oh sweetie, I wasn't talking about you. I wrote that song a long time ago. You do have a beatiful voice though, and you need to trust it!:cool:

Trust me I wasn't trying to give a wake-up call, you'd out sing me any day 

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(blushing)....thank you......outsing......no..no..my freind...your talent is yours...and mine is mine.  Now maybe we could blend good together....we might have something in common there....I could sing your kind of lyrics...I love the vibe of it.....like I said...your a very talented man...I wish you nothing but the best



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 Posted: Tue Jan 31st, 2006 10:52 pm
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Sean...you have a good song there. And your voice....great!!! I like it. It had my complete attention.....

Susan

 

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 Posted: Tue Jan 31st, 2006 11:19 pm
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Thank you so much!

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 Posted: Wed Feb 1st, 2006 03:19 am
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:D:D:P:)hey Sean,I'm going to start calling you blues,When I was a kid there was a movie called EASY RIDER and I looked a little like Fonda but you you're the real thing hear that Blues ya got me singin' The blues Lol I like your style.It's rich really rich and soulful in this one a t least Good Luck with it, Oh yeah a third verse is perhaps stretching it but it could maybe go there.

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 Posted: Wed Feb 1st, 2006 01:44 pm
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Thanks JGB, I started off playing blues so maybe that still comes through a bit.

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Really like your music and vocal, and your lyrics are great

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 Posted: Fri Mar 17th, 2006 12:41 pm
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Sean, since Gene brought this back to the top I'm sitting listening again. I just love the groove of the song. The solo is excellent!



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