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Definately a good song in the works here, The chorus seems solid. Maybe this could become a duet. Think Gretchen Wilson 1st verse and chorus, and Big or Rich 2nd verse and chorus, then both on the final chorus maybe. Just a thought, good luck with it.
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Definately a good song in the works here, The chorus seems solid. Maybe this could become a duet. Think Gretchen Wilson 1st verse and chorus, and Big or Rich 2nd verse and chorus, then both on the final chorus maybe. Just a thought, good luck with it.
 ..........You may be on to somethin' there dear............
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Just some thoughts......... as always keep em or sweep em
I tell my friends I've been waiting
and I've been holding out
I want that fairy tale ending
that's what life is all about
The men I've met have turned to toads
I need that Cinderella kiss
I want a man who understands
Lord where is my sweet prince
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Yeah...I can see Wilson doing this! It's cool girl!
I bow to you
Big John
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Dunno if this is pushin' it............. .......but here goes..........
Bonafide Redneck
(female vocal )
I tell my friends I've been waiting
That I've been holding out
I gotta have the fairy tale
That's what love is all about
All my men have turned to toads
But I want that Cinderella story
I need a man who understands
I demand love in all it's glory
(lift)
But destiny ain't abandoned me cold
I know there's a man who fits the mold
(male vocal )
I'll ride in on eight huge studs
Headlights blazin' on my Silverado
Radio blarin' with the good ole boys
A modern day desperado
The bad-boy southern smile on my face
Will leave no doubt what's on my mind
When this bonafide redneck brands your soul
You'll leave your prince behind.
(female vocal)
You're not kind of man I had in mind
With that Stetson, boots and jeans
Exactly how much could a redneck know
When it comes to romantic things?
(lift)
Mama said watch for trouble like you
Cause men like you jus' can't be true........
(instrumental bridge)
(male vocal)
It's true we like to raise some hell
And God knows I've done my share
But when it comes to lovin' girl
Those city boys can't compare
They may have gone to ivy-league schools
And learned to make lots of cash
But let a bonafide redneck steal your heart
An' you'll tell 'em to kiss your ***
© Melissa Williamson 2008
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Lissa,
This is awesome. When you get her all polished up, she's gonna be a beauty.
Hang in there - the writer's block will pass. Smile, and breathe. 
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Just a thought I had while reading possibly a tag line or something, maybe just something to be discarded.........
I need a real life countryfried
kind that loves you the best
certified who walks with pride
big time bonified Redneck
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Miss Lissa,
Have you heard Gunpowder and Lead? That's the feel I get with this one. Smooth with an edge in the verse, kickin' booty in the chorus. Check it out, you'll see what I mean.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xCd8Ig9RLqY&feature=related
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.........This idea's been rattlin' around.........thought I'd post it here .........not sure if it's ever gonna get finished.........but it's been drivin' me nutz........an' keepin' me from writin' anything else..........
.......That was my thought too........(actually, I keep havin' flashes of the Marlboro man ..........
........maybe a change in perspective?..........I'll run edit it...........
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.........Man.........some o' these people gotta get outta my head.............
..........Thanks John dear!............
........Only one problem now.............I think I evicted the friends in my head too soon.............now I got writer's block.............
WRITER'S
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.........but it's gettin' easier.........shoulda seen me the coupla weeks I had to school shop too...........good thing I'm an insomniac huh?.........
.........thanks for the kind comments..........
Hmmmmmmmm...........Let me know what y'all think..........
