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RedinFla
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Another rewrite................. Still channging and re arranging trying to get ready for Friday night open mic.
Up River
One more long week has said goodbye
now the weekends ours
but it's time that flies
So baby come up river with me
So let's go up the river girl
I want to take you on that river girl
come on - way up river with me
they'll be a full moon in the sky tonight
so we can drift back dreaming on the tide
oh baby come up river with me
The kids are at your momma's
and they won't be back tonight
the planets are all aligned
it's never felt so right
We can make love in the moonlight
as we take that midnight ride
let's not miss out on the chance
don't let it pass us by
So let's go up the river girl
I want to take you on that river girl
come on - way up river with me
they'll be a full moon in the sky tonight
so we can drift back dreaming on the tide
oh baby come up river with me
You can pack a picnic lunch
and I'll ice down some drinks
then hook the boat up to the truck
aw' honey what ya think?
We can take some fishing poles
but if the fish don't bite
we'll spread a blanket on the deck
and count stars in the sky
So let's go up the river girl
I want to take you on that river girl
come on - way up river with me
they'll be a full moon in the sky tonight
so we can drift back dreaming on the tide
oh baby come up river with me
Let's go up the river girl
I want to take you on that river girl
come on - way up river with me
they'll be a full moon in the sky tonight
so we can drift back dreaming on the tide
oh baby come up river with me
Last edited on Thu May 1st, 2008 09:09 pm by RedinFla
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| Posted: Sun Aug 10th, 2008 07:35 pm |
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badurrum
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I think you got it , I love where you are going with this and it reads good , I want to hear it when its put to music, I couldn`t get it to play on your link , I could only get your other songs, so i gave them a listen and I liked them all/ Good luck on this one as I`m a old river person( lived on the Ky river most of my life) sort of a been there, done that sort of thing. Nothin like being around the water that I don`t love/ Granny
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 I didn`t even see the date , I still like it I guess the RIVER was what drawed me in LOL You know what being up the river means don`t you Red
UP RIVER means up S--- creek with out a paddle LOL
Sorry about that mike, the devil made me do it/// Granny
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Last edited on Sun Aug 10th, 2008 10:19 pm by badurrum
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Your last post on this is May 1st, did you get it finished?
