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Floating in your light
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 Posted: Mon Jun 20th, 2022 02:12 pm
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RainbowKeeper
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Hey there….
Yes my big day is only a few days away and I have to admit, I’m getting scared…so why do I come up with stuff like this here? Gosh I really dunno…but it needed to be born.


FLOATING IN YOUR LIGHT

There is this intense golden light. A‘
It’s shining right from within you
While you walk and talk and giggle
And while you wander in your dream
Such a warm and mild shining light
I’ve never ever seen before
It reaches right into my soul
And love is following it’s stream

Rainbow‘s colours shine through your eyes
Eyes that perfect your honest face. A+
No words needed to comfort me
Your presence heals me from within
No idea on how you do it
No clue why you stay here with me
Tell me how could I be worthy?
But forgotten is every sin

Floating in your light. B
Dancing in your smile
Beautiful and bright
Floating in your light
Faith even in the darkest night
I’m admiring your light
Shining with all it’s might
Floating in your light

And whenever you may need me. C
I’ll be right there by your side
And whenever you are doubtful
Whenever you feel weary and the pain is wide
I’ll run to you and help you shine
Help you finding back your light and pride

No idea on how you do it. A*
No clue why you stay here with me
While hope replaces any sin
-Feeling the energy of your light-
It’s healing from within my skin

©️by Ian P./ 20.06.2022/ for: VALENTINE+



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 Posted: Tue Jun 21st, 2022 02:36 am
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This feels gentle and warm and loving.
Very nice Ian. :)



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 Posted: Tue Jun 21st, 2022 09:13 am
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Hey Owen,

Thank you once again for your feedback.

Greetings Ian



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 Posted: Mon Jun 27th, 2022 10:18 pm
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I love the positive energy coming from your words. It is bright and full of love, soothing and hopeful.

Good luck with the surgery. Sending prayers for you :)



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 Posted: Tue Jun 28th, 2022 06:16 am
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Hey Andrea
Thank for your feedback and kind words.
To keep u updated… I already had my surgery…yesterday and I’m still im hospital with all that’s included. Morphine here morphine there …. 😅 but yeah I’m ok so far just tired and still in a bit of pain.
Anyway, u have a good one today!
Ian



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 Posted: Tue Jun 28th, 2022 10:11 pm
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Good to hear you are on your way to recovery! You are pretty coherent for someone on morphine ;)

Hope the pain subsides soon and you are better than new.



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 Posted: Tue Jun 28th, 2022 10:31 pm
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Ty. Dunno what they give me but there is a big black computer box and if the pain gets to heavy all I need is to push a button in my hand. The Computerbox beeeps and I g t warm and tingly…. Good night for now



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