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 Posted: Tue Oct 12th, 2021 05:00 am
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WillyKuoMusic
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Hope you guys would like it!
R&B/Soul, Singer-songwriter

> https://soundcloud.com/user-54415704/falling-rain

> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qcSC0QJVFzA

> https://www.willykuomusic.com/

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 Posted: Tue Oct 12th, 2021 08:55 pm
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RainyDayMan
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I've moved this to the Music Databases > Pop/Rock/Alternative forum as it's more likely to receive feedback there.

Another strong groove, like your guitar style!

If you'd like feedback on the lyric it's helpful if you can post it here. I found parts of the vocal are a little hard to hear clearly in your recording but the melody is nice.

Also, we ask you to give feedback for others: two songs for each one you post yourself. A bit of give and take is what makes the site work.



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 Posted: Thu Oct 14th, 2021 01:10 am
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Still liking that guitar! I'd like to hear you try to do something more melodic with your vocals... Less words, less "rap" :cool:

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 Posted: Thu Oct 14th, 2021 10:39 pm
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ChrisPrice
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Great guitar. Rap is not really my thing, but I think it really works here. The vocal is really soulful imo. Could maybe do with a shift of direction midway but I think think is a great track.:)



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 Posted: Fri Oct 15th, 2021 08:58 am
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Another song, though I recognise the hard work put into the project,the music isn't something I'd listen too.
Excellent vocals and production nonetheless.
Best of luck with the song.
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JRC

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