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 Posted: Thu Apr 8th, 2021 10:32 am
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Hi friends of TSF,

this is my new song, I co-wrote it with my friends Ann Ammar and Marianne Eichorn.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JOZn2TzMov0

Any comment or feedback on the composition,performance, arrangement, mix is much welcome!!!
The original title of the song was "Seasons of life" and then we opted for the other one...
I played all the instruments and sung and produced everything. All the guitars are made with the same Chinese acoustic guitar (even the distorted solo in the end):Guitarman1:


If you wish to listen to the HD version and download it:
https://soundcloud.com/user-114195034/your-love-will-keep-me-strong-2

:)

Your Love Will Keep Me Strong

D G Asus4 D
I wasn’t aware of any battle
Em7/9 D/F# G Asus4
I didn’t know of any struggle
C D D#m5+ (or B/Eb or Ebmaj7#11)
My mother’s arms were my protection
Em7 D/F# G9 Asus4
until I reached the age of reason

Pre
C Bm9 Bbmaj7b5 Asus4
My eyes were opened to see more than me
Bm7 Em7/9 G9
As I entered into a new season

2
D G Asus4 D
No longer here the innocent breeze
Em7 D/F# G Asus4
perplexed by all the complexity
(or: along with feelings of unease)
C D D#5+ (B/Eb)
dealing with hard new realities
Em7 D/F# G Asus4
anxious thoughts forced me to my knees

Pre
C Bm9 Bbmaj7b5 Asus4
Rising with eyes that now perceive
Bm7 Em7 G
And I enter into a new season

Chorus
D G9
Greater beyond me is your reality
Bm7/9 D/C# G9
Stronger than my fears is Your fidelity
D
Safer than my mother’s arms
Am7/9
While life’s seasons come and go
G G/F# Em7/9 Asus4
Your Love will keep me strong

Bridge:

Dm4/F
Trusting You
D / F#
I walk with You
Dm4/F
through dark and light
D/F# Am7/9 Bm7/13 Bbmaj7#11 Gmaj7/A
with you to guide


Chorus:

Verse 3:
D G Asus4 D
I let your love surround my years
Em7/9 D/F# G Asus4
I feel again that innocent breeze
C D D#5+ (B/Eb)
through all the seasons of Your love for me
Em7 D/F# G9 Asus4
like a bird on the wind, I now fly free

Chorus
D G9
Greater beyond me is Your reality
Bm7/9 D/C# G9
Stronger than my fears is Your fidelity
D
Safer than my mother’s arms
Am7/9
While life’s seasons come and go
G G/F# Em7/9 Asus4
Your Love will keep me strong

Dm4/F D / F#
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 Posted: Thu Sep 16th, 2021 12:19 pm
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Great lyric my friend! Your accent really adds character to this :)



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Let's write something!!!! :)
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 Posted: Sat Sep 18th, 2021 09:10 am
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Thank you my friend!!!
after a few months I eventually received a feedback on the song
never despair :)



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 Posted: Mon Sep 20th, 2021 01:03 am
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Lovely song passionately sung.
I'll have to admit I don't comment much in the Gospel section.



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 Posted: Tue Sep 21st, 2021 02:00 pm
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Thank you RDM for your kind words!!!

I really didn't want to blame anyone, especially you who are devoting so much time and effort to this website

it's part of the game to post and not get any feedback



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