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All I Know (Collaboration with Nelly Tharwat)
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 Posted: Wed Apr 7th, 2021 06:08 pm
   
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UPDATE: *SORRY, TRACK NOT CURRENTLY AVAILABLE DUE TO POSSIBLE COMMERCIAL RELEASE*






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 Posted: Wed Apr 7th, 2021 10:46 pm
   
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Chris,

just outstanding! As soon as it started I knew I was going to love it.

Fantastic groove, you hit this one out of the park. Great mix and the musical and vocal performances are top notch as they always are from you. Love the organ. It that a Halion Sonic instrument preset or something else?

My only on suggestion is on how you ended it. It's like it drops off a cliff and it left me saying "whaatt?!!? Where'd the music go?" Maybe a slow fade out on the repeating last line or the chorus would fit the groove better.

Well done, great collab! You did the lyric justice for sure! Sounds like contest material to me!!

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 Posted: Wed Apr 7th, 2021 11:48 pm
   
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moptop wrote: Chris,

just outstanding! As soon as it started I knew I was going to love it.

Fantastic groove, you hit this one out of the park. Great mix and the musical and vocal performances are top notch as they always are from you. Love the organ. It that a Halion Sonic instrument preset or something else?

My only on suggestion is on how you ended it. It's like it drops off a cliff and it left me saying "whaatt?!!? Where'd the music go?" Maybe a slow fade out on the repeating last line or the chorus would fit the groove better.

Well done, great collab! You did the lyric justice for sure! Sounds like contest material to me!!

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Firstly thanks so much Dominick for your kind words and big thanks to Nelly for some great lyrics and for asking me to work with her again. The organ on this is Korg Triton - the vsti version. I agree with you about the ending - thanks for pointing that out. I'll chew it over and maybe do a bit more work on that. A fade out as you suggest or something a bit more definite. Anyway, thanks as always and take care.:)



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 Posted: Thu Apr 8th, 2021 09:45 am
   
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Chris, catchy tune with a solid bass in the backing track. Love the guitar break. Nicely sung, too. Don't give up on the abrupt ending too soon ... it might make it stand out!

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Thanks Kevin, I really appreciate your comments. I'm in two minds about the ending which probably means I'll leave it as it is! I know what Dominick means but, listening again a day on, I kind of like the way it ends on 'All I Know'.:)



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 Posted: Sat Apr 10th, 2021 11:44 am
   
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Thanks for positive comments guys. Sorry, the track is currently not available. More to come soon.:Guitarman1:



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 Posted: Sat Apr 10th, 2021 12:45 pm
   
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Hi Chris,
I'd love to hear this but when I click on the link, it says "page not found."
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 Posted: Sat Apr 10th, 2021 02:33 pm
   
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Hi Paulina, Hope you are well. Sorry about the broken link. Nelly asked me to take it down as she is thinking about releasing the song commercially and I gather she can't do that if it's up on one of the free platforms. I don't know how these things work as I've never considered doing this with my solo songs.:)

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 Posted: Fri Apr 16th, 2021 11:10 pm
   
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Wish I had heard it when I could. I hope I hear it one the radio one day soon. Good luck to you both!

Should I lock this thread for now?



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Andrea wrote: Wish I had heard it when I could. I hope I hear it one the radio one day soon. Good luck to you both!

Should I lock this thread for now?
Hi Andrea, Maybe you should lock the thread for now. Nelly fancied giving it a try and she has my support. If I'm honest I have no idea how this will pan out but I'm certainly going to carry on posting my songs here. :)



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 Posted: Sat Apr 17th, 2021 02:44 pm
   
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Hi Chris, I hope it works out for you guys. I will close the thread for now. It can always be reopened:)



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