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Another blank page, an empty mind moment Unlimited potential, no direction Earnestly intent, inspired by the stars Dark eternal waters, no reflection At odds with creation, yet I’m still compelled The spirit guides me when all logic fails What will be will be, my heart is always free I close my eyes and see... Miracles Injustice rules by Hell's sovereignty Spirits reborn enslaved by debt Smiling promises, evil Intentions None dare imagine eternal judgment Seek deeper meaning in duality Submit to authority, be a good friend Placating poet screaming at the heavens Meaningless effort chasing the wind At odds with creation, yet I’m still compelled The spirit guides me when all logic fails What will be will be, my heart is always free I close my eyes and see... Miracles A legacy of promise An eternity that's real The time is upon us Gods Word, God's Will |
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derrickhand300 Member 
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Its beautiful Poetic words To me it sounds like the struggle that ALL Christians have and few admit One moment questioning Gods purpose and direction for them- then the next minute praising God for the plan none of us understand Just what it evoked in me Last edited on Sun Jan 17th, 2021 12:23 am by derrickhand300 |
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Ecclesiastes...  |
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derrickhand300 Member
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JAPOV wrote:Ecclesiastes... EXACTLY The sun rises and the sun sets, and hurries back to where it rises. The wind blows to the south and turns to the north; round and round it goes, ever returning on its course. |
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Andrea Moderator
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I really like this. It feels so emotional and deep. V1 and the chorus are my favorites. Time for music |
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gwenjsc5 Member
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I agree with all previous posts. This is very moving. I would love to hear it with music. Gwen |
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