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How Much Farther We Can Fall
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 Posted: Thu Oct 15th, 2020 03:26 pm
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M.P. Dudash
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If it’s the thrill of the hunt
The chase that you want, I’m game
In the darkness of night when we make love
I’ll have you calling out my name

Every lingering thought has got me caught up
In another time another place
One where we’ll get the chance to meet up
And I can tell you face to face

I wanna see you
Hold you
Touch you
Show you
Just how much farther we can fall

You know I want you
I need you
I can’t go on without you
There’s still so much farther we can fall
There’s still so much farther we can fall

There’s a big love in a small town
That still hasn’t got around to bein’
And everyone that knows them knows exactly
Exactly what they’re seein’

So should our time ever come I won’t run
Cause I still believe in
What’s meant to be will always be forever
And that’s what’s got me thinkin’

I wanna see you
Hold you
Touch you
Show you
Just how much farther we can fall

You know I want you
I need you
I can’t go on without you
There’s still so much farther we can fall
There’s still so much farther we can fall

There’s a slow dance for old friends
A second chance at romance
We only have to tear down the walls
So tomorrow I guess I’ll take the first step
And finally make the call

Cause I wanna see you
Hold you
Touch you
Show you
Just how much farther we can fall

You know I want you
I need you
I can’t go on without you
There’s still so much farther we can fall
There’s still so much farther we can fall

Copyright © Michael P Dudash 2020



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 Posted: Fri Oct 16th, 2020 09:15 am
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RainyDayMan
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I like it Mike! Less plaintive and more assertive.
Definitely got some energy to it. I can imagine it singing well.

I really like those opening lines. There's a strong rhythm to them. You might adjust those after the chorus to match:
There’s a big love in town
That hasn’t got around to bein’
of course that only fits how I hear it my head!

And I like the shorter lines in the chorus. Nice contrast and offers the singer room to move.

Good stuff.



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 Posted: Sat Oct 17th, 2020 02:52 am
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I like it but (hey I'm just saying) lines 3, 5 and 21 need a second look.



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