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 Posted: Fri Sep 25th, 2020 03:29 pm
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I started on this project today actually. I have a demo posted on my newgrounds account. I hope if I post the link that's not against the rules or anything.

I've been writing stuff with lyrics for the past 10 years roughly, but my earlier creations were not so good in my opinion. My instrumentals have generally always been good. I'm more of an orchestration guy. But, I have spent countless hours developing my vocal recording "sound" both with autotune and without.

this recording is a raw recording of me singing, and the instrumental was made by me. feel free to check out other projects I have on that newgrounds account to see the transition.


https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/967029

curious to see what you think!

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 Posted: Sat Sep 26th, 2020 12:25 pm
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just wanted to update the link. I have a video on youtube now.
https://youtu.be/CpM368KNjnI

Last edited on Sat Sep 26th, 2020 12:30 pm by TranceCrafter

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 Posted: Sat Sep 26th, 2020 07:08 pm
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I love electronica/trance. Your voice is fine, I was hoping this was going to evolve into something with a beat! :)



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Very nice! Like the progression and dynamics.
The "I just wanna be"s work very well.
At the end of that you might try singing out strongly on "let me out"
There is certainly room there for drums/percussion if you want it.
Is this WIP or is it the entire song? It feels like it's only the first part of a longer piece.



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 Posted: Tue Sep 29th, 2020 12:03 am
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honestly? it's a wip and I have no idea how I should approach writing the second verse. and/or make the first verse continue into the drums for a bigger chorus and treat the current chorus as a bridge???

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Post the lyrics! Trust me, you'll get all kinds of suggestions :)

I have a complete lyric, well suited for trance/electronica, if you're interested. I even have a start on the music :)



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 Posted: Sun Oct 11th, 2020 01:32 pm
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Damn, very cool so far! I can see a verse 2 as

I’m finding my way
Everyday
While fighting the rage
I’ve yet to face

I’ve held out my hand
I’ve taken a stand
I’ve searched for answers
But I don’t understand

Something along those lines???

Can’t remember enough to add more, but like Japov suggested, add lyrics and you will get help.



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