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 Posted: Sun Sep 13th, 2020 10:18 pm
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God and heavenly Father
The Alpha and Omega reigns
The trinity of truth
Name above all names

May your kingdom's gates
Remain open unto them
Glad to serve your will
In New Jerusalem

Your Wisdom is provision
Your Word, the breath of life
Lord of all creation
The perfect sacrifice

Imperfect as a child
Forgiveness is my teacher
Your Spirit is my guide
I am my brothers keeper

The bride of Christ is ready
Born again and grateful
The everlasting church
Those who fear no evil

Thy will be done
Thy kingdom come
Thy will be done
Thy kingdom come...



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Beautiful lyrics and meaning. A profound message. I notice a lack of rhyme of the last verse

The bride of Christ is ready
Born again and grateful
The everlasting church
Those who fear no evil

the rhyme is not always mandatory. Sometimes we can prefer do not care about the rhyme if we really want to say something specific.



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 Posted: Wed Sep 16th, 2020 07:22 pm
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Perhaps "An addendum to the Lords prayer" will make more sense if I show it this way...

"Father in heaven, hallowed be thy name..."
God and heavenly Father
The Alpha and Omega reigns
The trinity of truth
Name above all names

"Thy kingdom come, Thy will be done on earth as it is in heaven..."
May your kingdom's gates
Remain open unto them
Glad to serve your will
In New Jerusalem

"Give us this day our daily bread..."
Your Wisdom is provision
Your Word, the breath of life
Lord of all creation
The perfect sacrifice

"Forgive our sins as we forgive those who sin against us..."
Imperfect as a child
Forgiveness is my teacher
Your Spirit is my guide
I am my brothers keeper

"Lead us not unto temptation, deliver us from evil..."
The bride of Christ is ready
Born again and grateful
The everlasting church
Those who fear no evil

Thy will be done
Thy kingdom come
Thy will be done
Thy kingdom come... :)



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 Posted: Wed Sep 16th, 2020 09:01 pm
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I like first version much better.

TLP is a wonderful model prayer. I use its pattern when asked to pray at a social gathering

You’re gifted. Words flow well hadn’t noticed the absence of rhyme. Flowed so well and sounded so right



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MASempine wrote:
I like first version much better.

TLP is a wonderful model prayer. I use its pattern when asked to pray at a social gathering

You’re gifted. Words flow well hadn’t noticed the absence of rhyme. Flowed so well and sounded so right


I appreciate that! TLP is a good meditation as well, which is where the poem came from. That's why I figure most people just don't get it lol. :)



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Very inspiring lyrics! Nice! :D

My favorite section is:
Your Wisdom is provision
Your Word, the breath of life
Lord of all creation
The perfect sacrifice

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Oh my favorite part was:

Imperfect as a child
Forgiveness is my teacher
Your Spirit is my guide
I am my brothers keeper

99% of Christians don’t really get that. They even say Jesus didn’t mean the TLP wording literally.

He meant it literally. He is the WORD

I know His words could have been changed BUT NOT THESE WORDS. They have to have been repeated thousands then millions of times thru the centuries



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Then the Word became flesh and dwelt with us... :)



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This is beautiful. It is well written and meaningful. Thanks for sharing.



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Give it a spin Andrea, SING IT! :)



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JAPOV wrote:
Give it a spin Andrea, SING IT! :)

You are much better singer than I. Do you have music yet?



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Nope... just a rhythm :)



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For Andrea and japov and the few others:
You folks may not realize how blessed you are to play and sing. Enjoy your talent but always remember that it’s special. Most people dont have it.



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MAS, always good advice for all of us here.

JAPOV - share this rhythm you have. Let's get a melody working :)



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Think Waltz :)



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JAPOV wrote:
Think Waltz :)

Yes. I like that - I can hear it in my head.



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