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Nothingless Member 
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My new song "Multiply Our Love", inspired by the miracle of the multiplication of loaves and fish. Sung together with a group of volunteer friends (4 Germans and 1 American) at the Monastery of Tabgha, the place of the miracle, where I lived for 3 months and where I also shot the video. Apart from one girl that sings very well, we were all improvised singers and I must say that my friends did very well, but above all it was a very beautiful experience of friendship and sharing in the Lord. This was the main value, I do understand that the singing is the weak part. I used the pitch correction heavily but doesn't make miracles. I sang the last 2 choruses. All the guitars are made with the same classic guitar even the distorted solo. I was told the solo is too extravagant for the genre...I asked help to edit the lyrics to an american friend and he told were fine. Another friend after the release told me there are not grammar errors but unusual phrases a native speaker wouldn't use. The last 2 choruses are busy, I am happy of it and this is willingly. But I am not really happy of the mix, I would love to achieve more clarity and separation. I hear still some harshness too here and there. Any constructive comment is appreciated. The video https://youtu.be/GUgQ5JEWu5o If you want to read the story of the song or download it in HD go to my blog where you find the Soundcloud and Spotify links https://www.nothingless.net/multiply-our-love/ surprisingly the song had more than 2000 streams on Spotify. I didn't do any serious promotion but was included in some playlists by some listeners. I was shocked when I have seen my song in a playlist just below a song of the Rolling Stones!!!  I tell just to encourage all of you guys....even our imperfect productions can be loved by people in a way we wouldn't expect.Multiply our love Here to love and to begin An image of you within Wasn’t casual really not You led us here you alone Where we met each other what a surprise To find we are one heart with you, among us We ’ll never loose all who’s born between us What if we tremble for now We are leaving but you precede us to another shore Multiply loaves and fish We have nothing but you Lord Awesome miracles will show Multiply our love Is a river that will never cease to flow Is this lake that soon enough will overflow In a while will overflow Here to love and to ensure That your children may rejoice and turn to you All the poor, who’s in need May find us as greater friends and heart’s relief As soon as we love each other what a surprise To find we are one heart with you, among us We’ll never loose all who’s born between us What if we are so full of joy For we are together and you precede us to another shore Multiply loaves and fish We have nothing but you Lord Awesome miracles will show Multiply our love Is a river that will never cease to flow Is this lake that soon enough will overflow In a while will overflow Multiply loaves and fish We have just a few little ones But you look to another thing You want to see our faith, our love You want to strengthen us toward the other shore To the next side where you already wait us even more Where we’ll meet surely again To multiply our love Last edited on Tue Sep 1st, 2020 12:24 pm by Nothingless |
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icystorm Member
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An excellent and very uplifting song and video, Nothingless. Nicely done by all in your group. I will share it with friends.  Last edited on Tue Sep 1st, 2020 08:51 pm by icystorm |
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RainyDayMan TSF Administrator 
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Lovely graceful flow to it. Some beautiful voices and lovely guitar picking. Very enjoyable! |
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Nothingless Member
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Hi icystorm and RainyDayMan, you are very merciful and encouraging here at the Songwriter Forum....I am so happy you liked the song Thank you!!!  |
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JAPOV Member 
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Wow, what an ambitious production! I could nit-pic this but I won't BECAUSE IT'S SO REAL! BEAUTIFUL |
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Nothingless Member
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Many Thanks Japov! I don't want to force you to fussiness, but actually if someone can nit-pic the song I would enjoy. I love the accolade, but also the constructive criticism that helps me to improve my next productions. |
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JAPOV Member
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It's too easy to be a critic my friend! This obviously took a lot of effort and I won't nit-pic something that I couldn't have done myself |
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Andrea Moderator
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Such a beautiful message. I love how different people came together to deliver this song. I enjoyed seeing in the video the people who took part. That made it all feel so real. The music was very nice too. Thanks for sharing |
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Nothingless Member
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Thank you Andrea you are so kind, you are right, to see in the video all my friends adds a lot. I decided to concentrate the energies more on music production learning than on video production to avoid to be overwhelmed, I did the video really rushing but it makes the song much more enjoyable |
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John_Sturgill Guest
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Outstanding.....very soothing and loved the video. |
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Nothingless Member
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Thank you John! |
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