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jdtaper
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There’s Always Tomorrow

Verse 1:

You feel alone, no one’s by your side

Now there’s nothing you want to by but cry

Your friends ask you if you’re okay and you lie:
“Don’t worry.”

I know you feel like the world is unfair

And that no one, no one even cares

Listen when I say, it won’t always be this way

Chorus:

Don’t give up, just keep on living

The future is in your hands

Just let go of all the pain inside

It belongs in your past

Let love in and forget about all of your sorrow

There’s always tomorrow

There’s always tomorrow

Verse 2:

You say, “what’s the point of fighting”

But anything’s better than dying

One more day is all you need to change your life

Chorus:

Bridge:

There’s always tomorrow

Tomorrow’s a brand new day

You’re strong enough

Don’t run away

Chorus:

There’s always tomorrow… (Fade…)

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This is quite good, JD. It sing pretty smooth and is relatable. I like it! V1, Line 2: Now there’s nothing you want to by but cry, doesn’t sound right. Did you mean: Now there’s nothing you wanna do but cry? The rest is fine. Good job!

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Tomorrow never comes

Song is fine but I’ve grown to doubt its truth.

Can’t always “get past it”. Just live with loss and think about other things. Hate to be so negative. Ignore my babbling. You’ll be happier

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This is nice, kind of lifts my sprite. I think it'd go well with a piano in the background.

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Take a look at the size of verse 2 compared to verse 1...

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An upbeat take on on an age old dilemma. We can see who the optimist of us two is.😂 I’d have taken the other route, but that surprises no one.


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