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| Posted: Mon Aug 17th, 2020 10:45 pm |
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jdtaper
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Overdrive
Chorus:
My heart’s in overdrive
It’s in overdrive
(Repeat):
Verse 1:
Girl, everytime I see you, you light up my fire
You fill me with so much desire
You know what want, you know what I need
Don't make me wait, girl can’t you see that…
Chorus:
Verse 2:
From your long, blond harit to your pretty blue eyes
I just wanna make you mine
You’re my every need, my pride and joy
I’m your good ol’ Country boy, and…
Chorus:
Bridge:
When you put your lips on mine, I just can’t resist
You want me, I want you
It don’t get better than this
Oh, yeah!
(Fast guitar instrumental break)
Chorus:
Verse 1:
Outro:
My heart’s in overdrive
It’s in overdrive
It’s in overdrive
It's in overdrive…
(Fade)...
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| Posted: Tue Aug 18th, 2020 02:03 am |
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MASempine
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Couple of typos.
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‘harit’ should be hair
Good Hook
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| Posted: Wed Aug 19th, 2020 02:59 am |
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| Posted: Sat Aug 22nd, 2020 12:43 am |
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Andrea
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I really like your hook. Feels like a good country song. The rhyme scheme is a bit off, so maybe tweak that a bit.
And, correct any typos 
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| Posted: Tue Aug 25th, 2020 03:33 am |
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John_Sturgill
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Interesting starting with the chorus. I like it
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