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jdtaper
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All the Love in the World

Verse 1:

Her mom and dad wouldn’t give up the whiskey

They just left her all alone

A man went into the shelter

And told her he would bring her home

Pre-Chorus:

She thought no one loved her

And that she would always feel sad

But he came along

And gave her the family she never had


Chorus:

He changed her life

She won’t have to worry, won’t have to cry

He’ll stay by her side

He said, “Baby girl, trust and believe in these words.

I’ll give you all the love in the world.”


Verse 2:

She hugs her teddy bear at night

And she dreams sweet dreams

Pushing her on the swing
Teaching her to ride a bike

She knows he’ll never leave

Chorus:
Pre-Chorus:

Chorus:
(Fade…)

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I lov the story

Not too much—just barely enough and that’s fine

Mystery about the connection between them. That’s fine too

I’m sure your music and singing will be better than fine

Good job. Good song about good people making a difference

RainyDayMan
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One to pull on the heart strings.

It's a bit too sweet for me personally, but I reckon there's a large audience out there that would eat it up.

Andrea
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This is a sweet and emotional story. For me, I think it would be more impactful it there were names instead of "she" and "a man".


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