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 Posted: Tue Aug 11th, 2020 08:15 pm
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Verse 1:

There are a lot of pretty girls out there

But only you can make me stop and stare

I love that you're the one I've got my arms around

Got everybody talkin' in our little town

Love all this love you're givin'

It feels like I'm in heaven

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It's only you

It's only you I run to

Only you, girl only you

Don't you know I love you

Verse 2:

Your long hair, your beautiful eyes

They shine as bright as that sun in the sky

Wearing jeans or a long black dress

Girl, you always look your best

You're perfect but you can't see

You'll always be an angel to me

Chorus 1:

Chorus 2:

It's only you

It's only you that I hold on to

Only you, girl only you

Don't you know, don't you know that I love you

(Fast, melodic instrumental break)

Bridge:
Only you, girl only you
Don't you know I love you
(Repeat)

Chorus 1:

Chorus 2:

Bridge (x3):



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 Posted: Tue Aug 11th, 2020 10:04 pm
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JD, I can hear this in the modern style. I don’t see anything that really stands out in need of fixing. The bridge, though simple really pulls it together. Nice work



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 Posted: Thu Aug 13th, 2020 12:29 am
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I feel like there is a change of tone between verse 1 and the rest.
Verse 1 feels more casual and light-hearted, whereas after that it's more intense and an all out love song.
And both are fine individually, but they don't seem to fit together.

The music and the way it's sung might bring it together.



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 Posted: Thu Aug 13th, 2020 04:31 am
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I didn’t see what RDM saw. Not sure it would be an issue t me got to add detail or contrast or summarize. Ideally with a catchy hook type phrase. That may be what it needs to make it more memorable.



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 Posted: Fri Aug 14th, 2020 08:50 pm
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Wanted to visit again any updates on production



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 Posted: Sat Aug 15th, 2020 02:57 pm
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I think this is simple and sweet. I like V1 quite a bit. V2 doesn't feel as solid

Your long hair, your beautiful eyes - maybe more details here (ie. long red hair, deep green eyes)

They shine as bright as that sun in the sky - this line is kind of cliche

Wearing jeans or a long black dress

Girl, you always look your best - ok, but I don't personally care for the 'look your best'

You're perfect but you can't see - 'you can't see' comes out of no where to me.

You'll always be an angel to me - cute line

I am not a the best to give advice on country, so feel to take my thoughts with a grain of salt.

Overall, I think it would sing nicely.



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 Posted: Wed Aug 26th, 2020 04:42 pm
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I hope you provide a link to you singing it.

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