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 Posted: Sun Jul 26th, 2020 06:27 pm
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Damien ask me to write the lyrics to this song. We’ve been working on it for a couple of weeks. Came out serious hard core blues. Hope you like it. CMA. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DlYVpOONe3c&feature=youtu.be

Love Can Sting
Music: Damien, lyrics: Charles M Anderson © 2020

Intro: [BACK VOCAL] Eu eu... eu eu
Eu eu... eu eu
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A1:
[LEAD VOCAL] Love can sting...
[BACK VOCAL] the pain it brings...
[LEAD VOCAL] You told me... I’ll always be the one
[LEAD VOCAL]  Night we met... 
[BACK VOCAL] that blues quartet...
[LEAD VOCAL]  Played our songs (whispers) all night long... 
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A2:
[LEAD VOCAL]  Love can sting...
[BACK VOCAL] was I your fling...
[LEAD VOCAL] You left me... in misery... 
[LEAD VOCAL] Note you left...
[BACK VOCAL] where you confessed...
[LEAD VOCAL] You belonged... (spoken) it all was wrong...
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(Guitar solo) (Low whisper) I’m to blame... I didn’t... see your ring... oh, love 
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Bridge part 1:
[BACK VOCAL] What were we thinking
[BACK VOCAL] We were caught in a trance, (whisper) oh love
[BACK VOCAL] Songs she was singing 
[BACK VOCAL] Had us lost in romance

Bridge part 2:
[BACK VOCAL] Snuggling and dancing, (whisper) wow love
(Short guitar riffs)
[BACK VOCAL] We created a scene 
(Short guitar riffs)
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(Whisper) How love can sting 
(First guitar solo)
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(Second guitar solo)
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A3:
[LEAD VOCAL]  Love can sting...
[BACK VOCAL] heartaches it brings... 
[LEAD VOCAL]  Though you’re gone...
[BACK VOCAL] you’re in this song...
[LEAD VOCAL] Tell me true...
[BACK VOCAL] is our love through...
[LEAD VOCAL] Now that I’m lost...
[ALL VOCALS] Still have love’s sting



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 Posted: Mon Jul 27th, 2020 10:29 am
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That's very cool! Smoky, bluesy, a little jazzy.

The shorter lyrical phrases leave plenty of room for the riffs and breaks that bring this together.

The whispers, spoken parts and back vocals definitely give it a style that works well.

Good track! :)



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 Posted: Mon Jul 27th, 2020 07:34 pm
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Thanks, RD Man,
Damien really put his heart and soul into it. And a ton of work producing the video. What a musician!

Charles



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 Posted: Fri Jul 31st, 2020 04:51 pm
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Yep! Jazz/Blues fusion, luvin' it! Great job guys! :Guitarman1:



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 Posted: Sat Aug 1st, 2020 08:46 am
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Thanks, JAPOV... Damien put a lot of work into it and it came out superb.

Charles



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