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34 Candles
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 Posted: Sun Jul 26th, 2020 10:59 am
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Guitarquango
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Hi folks,
just finished the production of "34 Candles".Emily wrote the tune in 2018. Together with the Gaugolon Orchestra we now arranged a version with Emily's voice & keys, the orchesta and my guitar.
https://youtu.be/0z8RvJGQrSM
Greetings and have a nice sunday,
Jimmy

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 Posted: Sun Jul 26th, 2020 08:44 pm
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Very nice. An original song with some clever lyrics.

The orchestral production works well with the softness of her voice.

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 Posted: Mon Jul 27th, 2020 03:37 am
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Nicely put together. "34 Candles" is a strong and memorable hook.

It's very easy to listen to. Lyric is fairly light, not too deep & meaningful, but it works.

Have you considered adding drums & bass to this? Would require some remixing, but might make it more commercial in today's environment.



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 Posted: Mon Jul 27th, 2020 10:32 am
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I can only echo what's already been said here. A really good arrangement and an excellent vocal. Fabulous.:)

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