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 Posted: Fri Jul 24th, 2020 04:36 pm
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This is my version of the Our Father

the YouTube video with original images of the places where the prayer was pronounced by Jesus:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lTzawIVkLkA

the SoundCloud version, with the best audio quality:

https://soundcloud.com/user-114195034/our-father-the-lords-prayer

I did everything in my home studio. I appreciate your comments on the music, mix, composition. To my ears it is not perfect, a bit muddy and maybe mastered too low. I am satisfied thought, it is my first release! Thanks



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 Posted: Fri Jul 24th, 2020 08:15 pm
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Fantastic! Can barely hear your accent lol.. Great video too! Did you film that in Israel? Are there many Christians in Israel?



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 Posted: Sat Jul 25th, 2020 12:40 pm
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Thank you for the encouraging comment!!! My English pronunciation was really a concern, as Italians we don't have a great reputation as good English speakers, I tried my best!!

Sure I filmed this in Israel, in the video you see the Sea of Galilee, I live here very near to the lake.
In Israel Christians we are only about 2% of the whole population.

from wikipedia

The religious affiliation of the Israeli population as of 2019 was 74.2% Jewish, 17.8% Muslim, 2.0% Christian, and 1.6% Druze, with the remaining 4.4% including faiths such as Samaritanism and Baha'iism, and irreligious people with no faith.

nice to meet you Japov



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 Posted: Sat Jul 25th, 2020 11:17 pm
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This is just beautiful!!

Your English is perfect, you sang this beautifully! Don't give your pronunciations a second thought.

I love the musical arrangement and the musical performances are top notch. Love the guitar work! I watched the video version and I love the scenes you used. Looks like a very magical place!

You have a wonderful interpretation of The Lord's Prayer and you should be very proud of it. I loved it very much!

Thank you for sharing this!

Last edited on Sat Jul 25th, 2020 11:18 pm by moptop



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 Posted: Sun Jul 26th, 2020 12:57 am
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Beautiful song man. The mix sounds good. Great job.



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 Posted: Sun Jul 26th, 2020 05:25 pm
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Thank you Moptop and Samiamamsam your comments are so kind!
I am happy my music touched your heart! :D



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This is very lovely. The music and vocals lend to the emotion in the prayer. Very nice.



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