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 Posted: Sun Jul 19th, 2020 12:57 pm
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Listerine listerine listerine listerine
I'm begging of you please come kill this breath
Listerine listerine listerine listerine
please take away this taste of death

your colour purple is total care
a burning feeling but I don't care
my gums alight with the taste of listerine

I feel fresh like the breath of spring
of breath fresheners you are king
no other can compare to you listerine

I think about you when I wake from sleep
there's nothing I can do to keep
from taking my first gulp of listerine

And now I really understand
why listerine's for every man
and how good it feels to use listerine

Listerine listerine listerine listerine
I'm telling everyone to give it a try
I guarantee those germs will die

you could choose some other stuff
but it will never be good enough
you're the only one for me listerine

I had to have this talk to you
I hope that my message did get through
whatever you decide to do try listerine

Listerine listerine listerine listerine
I'm begging of you please come kill this breath
Listerine listerine listerine listerine
please take away this taste of death

CopyrightAlanEvans19072020

Last edited on Sun Jul 19th, 2020 01:23 pm by Seamus2

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 Posted: Sun Jul 19th, 2020 02:51 pm
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That's pretty good Alan. Always liked parody songs.
Maybe Weird Al will buy this from you.



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 Posted: Sun Jul 19th, 2020 11:00 pm
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ha! Well that's a little light relief!
Is that the first parody you've posted?

Good fun.



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 Posted: Tue Jul 21st, 2020 08:06 am
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First time I've ever tried it like you say all a bit of fun. Thanks for commenting.

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Cheers friend, I live in hope lol.

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 Posted: Tue Jul 28th, 2020 09:56 pm
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This is great. It is clever and funny. I would consider not rhyming care with care:

your colour purple is total care
a burning feeling but I don't care - I could spare?



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 Posted: Wed Jul 29th, 2020 01:31 pm
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Dolly and bad breath, not the first thing that comes to mind when I think of her...๐Ÿ˜‚ but itโ€™s a fun take. I do like Andreas suggestion.



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 Posted: Sun Aug 23rd, 2020 04:22 pm
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I really enjoyed this. Ok,now I have to go gargle (just kidding) seriously. This is good stuff!



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