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God Sees You in a Different Light
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 Posted: Tue Jul 14th, 2020 06:11 pm
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MASempine
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Every morning you watch as
Your children walk into
The school house with snacks
And really cool shoes

You speed to the office
No contacts just glasses
And you look down
And see two diff’rent shoes

God’ll watch you in the fluorescent glare
As your mind’s on the kids not there
And he sees you in a different light
With disheveled hair
So much love in your eyes
To him you’re a beautiful sight
God sees you in a different light

He sees you every day and night

When you’re coaching soccer
There’s guys on the sideline
Who could have coached
But you had more time

They don’t know what God knows
That coach’s love shows
In more than just wins
But that’s fine with you

Let them all think what they want to
As for God when he looks at you

And he sees you in a different light
With disheveled hair
So much love in your eyes
To him you’re a beautiful sight
God sees you in a different light

He sees you as you every day and night



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 Posted: Sun Jul 19th, 2020 09:30 pm
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cmaja
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Hey, MAS... I like the feeling I get when I read this. The contrast between the paired verses is good. I love the pre-choruses and chorus. I‘d like to hear how it sings. Good job!

Charles



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 Posted: Mon Jul 20th, 2020 04:33 am
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MASempine
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You are too kind. Thanks. I wrote it for my grown daughters who have so much to do as mothers, workers, Chauffeurs and even coaches. I’ll record it and Give you a link



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