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 Posted: Thu May 7th, 2020 12:12 pm
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Seamus2
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Not much time left now
got to say my goodbyes
soon it will be over
there will be no surprise

so don't forget my white lilies
the ones that you promised me
I'll meet you on the other side
where we're meant to be

in the garden of heaven
white lilies enough for me
I'll be happy there waiting
knowing whats to be

so don't forget my white lilies
the ones that you promised me
I'll meet you on the other side
where we're meant to be

no need to be to tearful and sad
more than thankful for the times we had
together through good times and bad
wouldn't change much of what we had

so don't forget my white lilies
the ones that you promised me
I'll meet you on the other side
where we're meant to be

You'll find me in heavens garden
white lilies all around
didn't need to tell you
you know where I'll be found

so don't forget my white lilies
the ones that you promised me
I'll meet you on the other side
where we're meant to be


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 Posted: Fri May 8th, 2020 01:04 am
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I like it Alan. It's simple and sweet and touching.



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 Posted: Fri May 8th, 2020 07:28 am
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Nice, Alan... I hope to see white lilies after I make it through the brambles.

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 Posted: Fri May 8th, 2020 03:24 pm
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I was drawn in by the beautiful title and think it's a wonderful sentiment you've created here; would be interested in hearing this sung!
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 Posted: Fri May 8th, 2020 10:04 pm
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Very nice! The flow is very heavy so I’d personally imagine soft music to it. Soft not melancholic just soft. As an easy „goodbye“. Like the song says: „say goodbye with a smile, soon there‘ll be a new hello!“

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