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 Posted: Fri May 1st, 2020 03:21 pm
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Hey all, safe and healthy is the word of the day!

Here's a collab I worked on with Milo and Jeff. Milo supplied the wonderful lyrics and Jeff and I put it to music. Jeff provided a great vocal for this and I did all the instrumentation and backing vocals. I think it turned out well.

So let us know what you think. Lyrics below and also on the SC page.
Thanks for the listen.

https://soundcloud.com/jeff-walker-4/invitations-demo

Invitations
Music by Jeff Walker & Dominick B. Giarraputo
Lyrics by Milo Ippolito
Lead Vocal by Jeff Walker
Musical Performances by Dominick B. Giarraputo
Copyright © 2020

Well she ain’t as pretty
And I ain’t too smart
An affair would end in disaster
I turn on my pillow and there you are
You’re the one I promised forever

So why is that girl on my mind?

It’s hard to resist temptation
When a girl has that look in her eye
I admit to a bit of flirtation
Then she asked me to dance for a while
I’m caught in a bad situation
It’s hard to turn down invitations

The memory of that come on
As we lie here starts to fade
Just a fool who ought to know better
The thing I should remember
Is the promise that I made
That you’re the only girl I need forever

So why is that girl on my mind?

It’s hard to resist temptation
When a girl has that look in her eye
I admit to a bit of flirtation
Then she asked me to dance for a while
I’m caught in a bad situation
It’s hard to turn down invitations

She’s waiting for me
To RSVP
I guess I’ll politely decline
She gave me her number
It’s there in my wallet
With a note that says
Call me sometime

(It’s hard to resist temptation
When a girl has that look in her eye
I admit to a bit of flirtation
Then she asked me to dance for a while
I’m caught in a bad situation
It’s hard to turn down invitations
Last edited on Fri May 1st, 2020 10:18 am by moptop



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 Posted: Sat May 2nd, 2020 10:07 am
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I think you've nailed the country sound in this one.
Good job all round.

It's perfectly fine as is, but there would be an option to swap these two lines if you wanted:
It’s hard to resist temptation
It’s hard to turn down invitations



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To echo RDM..the sound is absolutely right. As I said about the last one of these, your friend has a great voice for this kind of music. Your production is spot-on too. Well done!:)

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RainyDayMan wrote:
I think you've nailed the country sound in this one.
Good job all round.

It's perfectly fine as is, but there would be an option to swap these two lines if you wanted:
It’s hard to resist temptation
It’s hard to turn down invitations


RDM,
Yes, that is a very good suggestion but I do have to defer to Milo on that since he was the lyricist on this one.

ChrisPrice wrote: To echo RDM..the sound is absolutely right. As I said about the last one of these, your friend has a great voice for this kind of music. Your production is spot-on too. Well done!

Thanks Chris, appreciate the support!

You two take care!



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Hey, Moptop... Sounds like you got country down pat. I like it all the way through. I even listened to it twice! Decent production too. Gimme some more.

Charles



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 Posted: Sun Jun 28th, 2020 09:25 pm
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cmaja wrote:
Hey, Moptop... Sounds like you got country down pat. I like it all the way through. I even listened to it twice! Decent production too. Gimme some more.

Charles


Thanks Charles,

Yeah, I do get the country thing right every once in a while.
Thanks for the kind words and support.

Hope your safe and well on this find summer Sunday afternoon!



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