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 Posted: Tue Mar 31st, 2020 08:27 am
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RealKevM
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Hi guys I know i'm not around much on here but it's a long story. I hope you are all keeping safe and well. Here's a live and acoustic isolation session (!) version of my song 'Come With Me' i'd love to know what you think :)

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Walk into the room like my name is Liam G
Yeah i'm singing my tune just like i'm Gerry C
Underneath the sky of a Courteeners flare
I love how it shines on your golden hair

Chrous
Are you coming
Are you coming with me?
Hold on baby cos you're coming with me
Are you coming
Are you coming with me?
Hold on darling cos you're coming with me

I know they'll never make
A monkey out of me
Oh all i'm asking is for you to believe
And if all I have is this moment right now
I'll sing the blues before I go down

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BdTzhsGUY_s



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 Posted: Wed Apr 1st, 2020 10:48 pm
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Are you coming
Come on with me
Hold on tight baby come on with me
Are you coming
Come on with me?
Hold on darling and come on with me

Just a thought... try holding your notes and sing the chorus like this. Less syllables, less choppy, easier to understand. Nice write, good one Kev! :)



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 Posted: Wed Apr 1st, 2020 11:11 pm
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Hey Kev! Nice to see you around :)

The chorus is catchy, and I can hear people singing along with that.

The verses didn't do as much for me. I didn't get the references so it all kinda swept over me. Might be for a targeted audience perhaps?



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 Posted: Fri Apr 3rd, 2020 09:02 am
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Cheers guys, thanks for that idea Japov i'll have a play about.

Yeah RDM, it is pretty english centric :)



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 Posted: Fri Apr 3rd, 2020 04:38 pm
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Hey Kev, good to hear you and see you're okay and healthy.

Like this one a lot. Well done! I like the way you aptly named it The The Isolation Sessions! I Guess we're all in that same boat with you!

Thanks for sharing and glad your safe!



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 Posted: Mon Apr 6th, 2020 08:16 am
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Cheers MopTop, take it easy!



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