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Ola,
As I said in another post I’m very deep with my own soul atm. Very self-reflecting. So this one had to be written. In fact all I did was checking my memos at my cell, that’s where I write down my ideas when I’m on the road, and i took some time to write them all down on paper. A few min ago I had the A‘ -part and then I was unable to stop. I even tried to sleep and switched the light out but naaa... I had to finish it. Specially the words and rhymes of the c-part didn’t want to stop in my head and so...I wrote it all down. 😅😉

Please let me know what you think! Tyvm!
Oh and btw I think the c-part should be spoken, or maybe some rap or reggae style...I would like that a lot as a break of the more epic frame around it.

Open your heart

I’m one of those without protection A‘
I’m walking around without my skin
A sensitive soul and a dreamer
And many say, that I’d never win
I can’t let go of what has happened
I make mistakes and learn the hard way
Those who can’t understand my silence
Won’t ever know what I have to say

I am searching for some company A+
A lover, companion and a friend
To share and to talk, to understand
And who will be there until the end
I swear I will give all that I can
And won’t ever vanish from your side
Our bond that may last forever
And through all seasons it shall abide

Open your heart B
Open your eyes
Before you judge me you better think twice
Open your heart
Open your eyes
I’m still waiting here
Ready to sacrifice
Ready to pay the price

It’s not the right time C
Maybe not the right rhyme
The world ain’t ready yet
It’s not the right time
Maybe not the right rhyme
And much to my regret
They still can’t see my silhouette
It’s not the right time
Maybe not the right rhyme
The world ain’t ready yet
It’s not the right time
Maybe not the right rhyme
And much to my regret
They still can’t see my silhouette

Maybe one day they will be ready A*
When time has told them who I have been
Then all I did wasn’t done in vain
And they will try to rebuild my skin


© by Ian P.
Words by Ian P.
18.03.2020
for: Valentine+B

Last edited on Wed Mar 18th, 2020 10:10 pm by RainbowKeeper


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