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Ola, As I said in another post I’m very deep with my own soul atm. Very self-reflecting. So this one had to be written. In fact all I did was checking my memos at my cell, that’s where I write down my ideas when I’m on the road, and i took some time to write them all down on paper. A few min ago I had the A‘ -part and then I was unable to stop. I even tried to sleep and switched the light out but naaa... I had to finish it. Specially the words and rhymes of the c-part didn’t want to stop in my head and so...I wrote it all down. 😅😉 Please let me know what you think! Tyvm! Oh and btw I think the c-part should be spoken, or maybe some rap or reggae style...I would like that a lot as a break of the more epic frame around it. Open your heart I’m one of those without protection A‘ I’m walking around without my skin A sensitive soul and a dreamer And many say, that I’d never win I can’t let go of what has happened I make mistakes and learn the hard way Those who can’t understand my silence Won’t ever know what I have to say I am searching for some company A+ A lover, companion and a friend To share and to talk, to understand And who will be there until the end I swear I will give all that I can And won’t ever vanish from your side Our bond that may last forever And through all seasons it shall abide Open your heart B Open your eyes Before you judge me you better think twice Open your heart Open your eyes I’m still waiting here Ready to sacrifice Ready to pay the price It’s not the right time C Maybe not the right rhyme The world ain’t ready yet It’s not the right time Maybe not the right rhyme And much to my regret They still can’t see my silhouette It’s not the right time Maybe not the right rhyme The world ain’t ready yet It’s not the right time Maybe not the right rhyme And much to my regret They still can’t see my silhouette Maybe one day they will be ready A* When time has told them who I have been Then all I did wasn’t done in vain And they will try to rebuild my skin © by Ian P. Words by Ian P. 18.03.2020 for: Valentine+B Last edited on Wed Mar 18th, 2020 10:10 pm by RainbowKeeper |
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