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 Posted: Wed Jan 29th, 2020 02:48 am
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TheRealMe
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Sit back down
the feeling of it how
Stress in this life is
just part and parcel now
I ain't backing down
thanks for coming round
Not much joy for me in life
But with u its happyness I've found
so thanks for the names the making me a dad the games your tried to play
just too make me feel bad
I know it's got you mad
A Raging bull the red flag
A man sticking too a routine for his boy
He calls me dad

Through all the things you say the nasty games you play never did stop me turning up today

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 Posted: Tue Feb 4th, 2020 01:34 am
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Billy_Lunch_Money
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You got a great ideas for a song here! However, I think the rhythming scheme is a little out in places here and there. But on the other hand, some songs don't follow a strict rhythming scheme.



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