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 Posted: Wed Jan 29th, 2020 02:05 am
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TheRealMe
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It's funny how People now
Walk about
Talk about How they found what's happening now I've found the words
Slipping out there mouth
is too much too bear
my reply an empty stare
Eyes glared I aint scared
I've grown stronger
Picked myself back up
Although it took me longer
Now as you sit down listen up to what I say keep yourself away from negitive energy
Positivity is key you'll see it's ok

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 Posted: Mon Feb 3rd, 2020 08:32 pm
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I am reading that something has happened to this person (love lost?) and he/she can't handle hearing friends talk about it (gossiping). Then he/she has overcome, grown, gotten over it and has some advice to share.

Maybe:
first verse - had "it" , lost "it" now people talk about it

2nd: how it used to hurt, but not anymore

3rd: learn from me

Chorus (many options here): gossip hurts, should've been there for me, not just talk about me (so to speak). don't let the bad times drag you under. Be positive and you will be stronger than before.

Just brainstorming - hope something sparks an idea.



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