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The Yang My Yin Lives In
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 Posted: Fri Oct 18th, 2019 11:26 pm
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cmaja
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I started writing this from a male perspective but it didn’t work. CMA

The Yang My Yin Lives In
_______________________Verse/Chorus
Chorus 1:
Our love’s everything to me
Our love’s more than I hoped it’d be
But that affair’s nothing but a sin
‘Cause you’re the yang my yin lives in

Verse 1:
You knew for sure that she’d be the cure but then she turned away
You came to me, I wiped your tears but you didn’t see
That I truly care but that affair haunts us everyday
So say goodbye and smile again
Since you’re the yang my yin lives in

Chorus 1: (as above)
Our love’s everything to me
Our love’s more than I hoped it’d be
But that affair’s nothing but a sin
‘Cause you’re the yang my yin lives in

Verse 2:
When she left you didn’t protest though she took you heart away
You took the time to see what it’s like to be free
You returned to me, hope someday you see I’m here to stay
So say hello and smile again
Since you’re the yang my yin lives in

Chorus 2:
Our love’s everything to me
Our love’s more than I hoped it’d be
Let’s make our love better than it’s been
‘Cause you’re the yang my yin lives in

Bridge:
You say you don’t want to be in love
I say you’re the one I’m dreaming of
Let’s mend our broken hearts
And let our love restart, ‘cause

Chorus 2: (as above)
Our love’s everything to me
Our love’s more than I hoped it’d be
Let’s make our love better than it’s been
‘Cause you’re the yang my yin lives in

Coda:
Since she’s no longer there, my love
Come be the yang my yin lives in

© 2019 Charles M Anderson



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 Posted: Sat Oct 19th, 2019 05:41 am
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Charles, Great rhymes and cool structure. I can hear this one.
Great write. I like it a lot.

Bunny



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 Posted: Sun Oct 20th, 2019 06:25 am
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cmaja
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Yea Bunny, this one sings pretty easily. I can’t read it without singing it. I don’t need a composer for it, I got the music.

Charles



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