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 Posted: Fri Sep 20th, 2019 11:09 am
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Big Mamma
© 2019 Alan Evans & Owen Hovenden

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Mamma, wrap your arms around me
I'm on fire, I got a burning need
No one else gonna satisfy me
Need your love for to set me free
Big Mamma, wrap your arms around me

Mamma just one look in your eyes
Stokes my fire, makes my temperature rise
Blazing with a sinful desire
Flaming like a burning pyre
Big mamma just one look in your eyes

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Big Mamma it's your love that I need
Say you want me, satisfaction guaranteed

Mamma, say it's gonna be tonight
Big woman, I'm gonna treat you right
Please me, squeeze me, in those thighs
Make sweet love till the morning light
Big Mamma, say it's gonna be tonight



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 Posted: Fri Sep 20th, 2019 04:44 pm
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Nice job Owen.

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 Posted: Sat Sep 21st, 2019 07:41 am
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Good start. Nice guitar work. Message it pretty straightforward.

Something is a bit off in the verses. The beat of the music is like a swing or shuffle but it sounds like the drums are trying to keep a straight 4/4. Consider checking/lining up the rhythm section.

Thanks for sharing.

Last edited on Sat Sep 21st, 2019 07:43 am by jamestoffee



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 Posted: Sat Sep 21st, 2019 08:30 am
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Thanks James, I'll look into that :)



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I like it Owen. Love the dirty sounding guitars.
Reminds me of old ZZ Top. Very Billy Gibbons'ish.
I agree with James about the drums.
Maybe a shuffle style would fit the music better.



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 Posted: Sun Sep 22nd, 2019 09:45 pm
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Cheers Sam!

Yeah, I haven't sorted the drums yet. I've tried adding some swing but that sounds worse. Might need some hand crafting.



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Ok. New version there now - same link.
Think I've got the drums sorted now.



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The link's not working for me, Owen.



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Well that's odd! It's working for me now. It doesn't automatically start playing when I get there, have to press the play key, but otherwise it seems ok.

Well, try this alternative link:
http://sclk.co/r/s8afan



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The first link worked fine for me, but did not play automatically.

Nice job on lining up the drums better. Something I hadn't considered before, but the fills still seems off (like they are 4/4 timing fills). I'll leave it to you to tweak as you see fit. Drums are my Achilles' heel.

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Nice groove, got me "in" and to be honest, wanting more!

Well done.

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@jamestoffee Thanks James. Yes the fills are 4/4, but I think it is less critical there as fills are normally a variant anyway.

@Kel Thank your sir! It is fairly short at around 2:30.
I did consider putting in an extra verse, but there's really not much more to say. A lead break might work, but not my forte.



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As Jimi Hendrix would have said, "It's nothin' but a JAM again!":Guitarman1:



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Hi Marty! Nice to see you round :)



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I love the new version Owen. The drums sound great!



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