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I Believe Because Of You
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 Posted: Sun Oct 4th, 2020 07:45 am
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Hi, Nathan... Yea, school studies take priority. Glade you like it. I went through the spiritual transformation when I was in college. After fighting a war I had to find the Truth. It was a difficult but fulfilling journey.

Charles



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 Posted: Sun Oct 4th, 2020 08:01 am
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JAPOV wrote:
Just trying to condense this a bit... Keep or sweep :)

I was lost without You
The truth was in my way
Vanity was all I knew
Served myself night day
Humility cleared my view
The day I found You

Chorus:
I believe in You
Sacrifice was due
Victory is yours
God's promise will endure
You're the light, the way, the truth
And I believe in You

Verse 2:
Now my path is clear
Faith keeps me on course
The Spirit ever near
Illuminates the Source
Saved only by your grace
I wait to see your face

Chorus:

Bridge:
You've healed my eyes, now I see
You paid the price and walk with me
Your Glory Lord, above all others
To serve your will, and serve my brother

Chorus:


Thanks, JAPOV, for the suggested change. But you gotta a whole new lyric here. You need to post this as your own. Mine is a reflection of the actual experience and transformation I went through. But I truly appreciate the effort you made.

Charles



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 Posted: Sun Oct 4th, 2020 05:43 pm
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I can't take credit for that lol... I just take inspiration where I can get it :)

I'm well aware that my style isn't very "conversational"... I guess you could call me a "sonic impressionist" :)



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 Posted: Sun Oct 4th, 2020 09:22 pm
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JAPOV wrote:
I can't take credit for that lol... I just take inspiration where I can get it :)

I'm well aware that my style isn't very "conversational"... I guess you could call me a "sonic impressionist" :)


Sonic impressionist! Wow, I’m impressed! That’s a picture I can’t quite see in musical terms. I’d love to hear it though.

Charles



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