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 Posted: Sun Aug 4th, 2019 08:58 am
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Khellie2000
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''Paano na lang''

Pagod na ko kakahintay ng text message mo...
Sawa ka na ba na makita kong muli.

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Pa'no na lang kita mamahalin kung meron ka nang ibang iniibig, pa'no na lang kita iibigin kung may-iba ka nang sasagutin.
Pa'no na lang, pa'no na lang, pa'ano na lang kung may-iba ka nang mahal...

Naghihintay na magbalik at kumatok ka nang muli sa puso
kong ikaw lang ang hiling, huwag ka na mangangamba may pasensya ka pa ba at akoy naghihintay na ikay magbalik...

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Pa'no na lang kita mamahalin kung meron ka nang ibang iniibig, pa'no na lang kita iibigin kung meron ka nang ibang kapiling, paano na lang, pa'no na lang kung may-iba ka nang kasiping... (Oo nga adun na nga tayo, eh ano hahayaan kitang masaya, habang akoy nagiisa) paano na lang oohh...

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Pa'no na lang kita mamahalin kung hindi rin tayo sa huli, pano na lang kita susungkitin, kung bawat oras may-iba kang kapiling oohh, paano na lang, paano na lang kita mamahalin oohh,

paano na lang, paano kita aabutin,
hhmmm, mm , paano kita aabutin ...2x

By: Khellie M.



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 Posted: Sun Aug 4th, 2019 10:41 am
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Should this be in the lyrics only, or do you have a link?

Also, do you have an English translation version?



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 Posted: Sun Aug 4th, 2019 03:36 pm
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jamestoffee wrote:
Also, do you have an English translation version?

Translated from Filipino to English.


'' How about ''

I'm tired of waiting for your text message ...
Do you feel sorry for me to see you again.

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Let me just love you if you have someone else to love, let me love you only if you answer something different.
It's okay, it's okay, what if you love someone so much ...

Waiting for you to come back and knock on your heart again
if only you asked, don't worry you still have patience and I'm waiting for you to come back ...

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I'll just love you if you have someone else you love, I'll just love you if you have another partner, after all, just know if you have a different partner ... (Yes. let's go, eh, I'll let you have some fun, while I'm alone) how come oohh ...

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I'm just going to love you if we're not the last, but I'm just going to regret it, every time you have someone with you oohh, how about, how much i love you oohh,

no matter what, how can i afford you,
hhmmm, mm, how can i get it ... 2x



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 Posted: Mon Aug 5th, 2019 10:20 am
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Sorry i dont get what you mean with that, could you clarify?

Thanks

Khellie M



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 Posted: Thu Aug 8th, 2019 12:09 pm
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For clarification, we have different sections/forums for songs that have music, and those that are lyrics only.

You have posted this song in the "Music Databases" > "R&B?Jazz Music" forum, which is intended for songs that have been already set to music. Usually there is some recording of that (not necessarily a professional demo, a home recording is fine) and if you include a URL link to that recording we get to hear it, and can give you feedback on the music as well. But you haven't included any such link with your post.

So the question asked was:
Is this a lyric only?
(in which case I can move it to the Lyric Only section

or if you do have a recording, can you supply a link so we can listen to it?



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