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| Posted: Tue Jul 30th, 2019 05:26 pm |
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Hey, songwriter's forum,
I wasn't really sure where else to post this but, for anyone interested, I have just written a new song on the ukulele called 'Madness Multiplied' which you can see here on my youtube channel: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CaNRlFu6Npg
I welcome any and all feedback 
The song documents a woman who is stuck between two dimensions in the pursuit of fantasy where she believes she will find happiness. A world hopping Blanche duBois if you will.
As an added bonus, there is also an original poem of the same name in the description for any poetry enthusiasts!
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| Posted: Wed Jul 31st, 2019 07:10 am |
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Hi Lou,
It’s a thin line between madness and euphoria. I remember in the war, when we got into this intense battle, I had a otherworldly encounter with Death. I was exhilarated by the experience. But it was a kinda madness and euphoria mixed into one. I was caught between two dimensions —not too different from your poem.
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| Posted: Wed Jul 31st, 2019 10:08 am |
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Hi there, thanks so much for checking out my work. And wow, that is such an interesting story too. Thanks so much for sharing that. And I 100% can agree that the line between euphoria and madness can be tantalisingly thin.
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| Posted: Wed Jul 31st, 2019 11:45 pm |
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Hi, wow thanks so much! And I may merge the two to create a song in the future but I would probably have to change quite a lot of the poem in order to achieve that but it definitely is an interesting idea!
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| Posted: Mon Aug 5th, 2019 11:35 am |
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Hi Lou,
What you write is very interesting. Very detailed and definitely paints a picture. I also listened to your "Love Me Tender" vocal...you have a very nice voice! Keep singing! 
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| Posted: Mon Aug 5th, 2019 11:57 am |
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Hi, again, Kellyanne, thanks so much for your lovely comments and for checking out my stuff!
If I am completely honest, now I have had time to think about this song, I wish I hadn't put this version out which I rushed and didn't prepare properly when writing it so I may re- upload a better recording in the future.
Regardless, I really appreciate you taking the time to listen to my work
Thanks
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| Posted: Mon Aug 5th, 2019 01:57 pm |
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AnonymousLou wrote:
Hi, again, Kellyanne, thanks so much for your lovely comments and for checking out my stuff!
If I am completely honest, now I have had time to think about this song, I wish I hadn't put this version out which I rushed and didn't prepare properly when writing it so I may re- upload a better recording in the future.
Regardless, I really appreciate you taking the time to listen to my work
Thanks
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I know what you mean! I find mistakes and things I wish I wrote differently all the time after I post songs. I drive myself crazy lol. Lately I've been trying to rewrite more, go back to the song and listen again, reread etc.. I always catch things I missed or don't like. On one of my last songs I actually mispronounced a word! We are our worst critic. But I think writing and making music is a wonderful thing. Don't overlook the joy in it. You're doing great! Keep going. Mistakes are keys to help you move forward. In a sense I am happy to find them. The timing of finding them is a different story lol. You will always learn and gain more knowledge and ideas...a fun ride it is!
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| Posted: Mon Aug 5th, 2019 02:00 pm |
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Yeah, I think more and more, I am trying to encourage myself to go back over things and pay attention to the details more and not always rush things- but I agree that making music is a wonderful thing and I think part of the rushing is because I am enjoying myself and want to get my music out there in the world.
And I really appreciate such kind comments from a songwriter with such an impressive soundcloud page! xx
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AnonymousLou wrote:
Yeah, I think more and more, I am trying to encourage myself to go back over things and pay attention to the details more and not always rush things- but I agree that making music is a wonderful thing and I think part of the rushing is because I am enjoying myself and want to get my music out there in the world.
And I really appreciate such kind comments from a songwriter with such an impressive soundcloud page! xx
Thanks,
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Oh you're too kind Lou...thank you very much. That's exactly why I rush too...it's exciting to finish something and put it out hoping someone will listen and like what we have created. I think it's important for songwriters (for anyone, but this is about creating/songwriting)to support and encourage each other. Especially at such a raw, green stage. Thank you Lou!
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