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 Posted: Sun Apr 7th, 2019 07:13 pm
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Working on a new song at the moment. Just wanna share the one I released last year:

https://open.spotify.com/album/2FbpVhBVKFIBq6C8sTnkRX

Dark clouds are gathering around you
Sunlight never seemed so far away
In the middle of the hurricane of emotions
Is this fragile soul who got carried away

Instrumental

Little things in life are worth living for
You have to find the switch to turn the tide
Trust in the people who believe in you
On the end of every tunnel is a light

The fear of childhood memories are still around you
Sometimes to cope with that is way too much
I wanna show your silver lining
All you need is just a gentle touch
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The fear of childhood memories are still around you
Sometimes to cope with that is way too much
I wanna show your silver lining
All you need is just a gentle touch


When dark clouds are not anymore around you
And sunlight will be there every day
The people who believe in you are still with ya
3 x Sometimes this fragile soul got carried away


©2018 - J Schaafsma - Psycho Maniacs Music - Mane Attraction Music

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 Posted: Sun Apr 7th, 2019 10:27 pm
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I don't have a spotify account. I don't really want one. I like the lyrics though.



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 Posted: Sun Apr 7th, 2019 11:04 pm
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Great production!

The music has a light and easy feeling to it. A little bit at odds really with the lyric with its dark clouds and hurricanes!

Really easy to listen to :)

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 Posted: Mon Apr 15th, 2019 05:21 pm
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I listened to this and it sounds like a solid country song. I like it! Maybe the title should be Fragile Soul.

Charles

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 Posted: Tue Apr 16th, 2019 06:58 pm
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I listened to the 30 sec teaser. Good singing and musical arrangement. I noticed.. some of the lyrics got jammed up when they were sung - the meter was off.. and some words like "cope".. well, you'll never hear that in a country song. It's just not in their vocabulary. Not that all folks who listen to, or write country music are "dumb" or ignorant; let's just say they subscribe to the KISS principle we had to learn as electronic technicians.. keep it simple stupid! Good story line, the bit I saw. Don't think you want to repeat that same verse twice verbatim either, unless it was the chorus (?)

SWJ



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