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hello What do you think of my demo songs?
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 Posted: Sun Feb 10th, 2019 12:26 pm
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https://soundcloud.com/polydor-rain/tell-me-demo

https://soundcloud.com/polydor-rain/listen-petunia-demo

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 Posted: Sun Feb 10th, 2019 03:25 pm
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Welcome to the forums. I like your demos. You should post them in the music database to get more feedback. Here is a link.
http://www.thesongwritersforum.com/forum/view_category.php?id=3



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 Posted: Sun Feb 10th, 2019 08:03 pm
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I've moved this post across to the "Music Database" section for you and, within that, the Pop/Rock/Alternative Music folder.

For the future, it's helpful if you post each song separately and include the lyric along with the link.
I was just listening to "Tell me", and I like the vibe / atmosphere you've got going, but beyond "tell me" I couldnt actually understand the words, so the having the lyric to read would really help there.

Ditto for "Listen Petunia". I like the vocal melody on that even more, but the reverb is very strong and the vocals are again indistinct / unintelligible.



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 Posted: Mon Feb 11th, 2019 04:10 pm
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in scottish:P

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