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 Posted: Mon Jan 21st, 2019 08:00 pm
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Marty Ray Boone

Joined: Mon Oct 24th, 2011
Location: Fort Mill, South Carolina USA
Posts: 874
Favorite Artist: "Rev.Jimmy Swaggart" "Owen Hovenden" Kerry Boone
I am a: Singer/Songwriter/Musician
As spoken in the book of Acts, the power of God on high
To touch the hearts and minds of Men, on him we can rely
The day up in the upper room, in languages of Earth
for every tribe and nation got the message of great mirth

The loving joy of Spirit, of a Holy God on high
Spoke a great revelation, the land where we'll never die
For Holy God is reaching to this planet here below
To give a hope of righteousness to cleanse the World below

From every sin and sorrow that so easily besets
Us from the great tomorrow that before us God has set
When we reach out to God, receive that power from on high
the word of God has come to us and asks us to draw nigh

Reject the powers of darkness that do hinder us below
Reach out to loving master and receive his love that flows
The languages are spoken right down here on Earth below
Receive the Holy Spirit and in him you'll fully grow

The loving basic message that our God does speak to me
Is that our Savior Christ has come to fully set us free
To give us life abundant, from the Spirit in the sky
For if you fully trust in Christ, you then shall never die!

copyright Monday, January 21st, 2019


Last edited on Sun Feb 24th, 2019 07:26 am by Marty Ray Boone

Marty Ray Boone, now seeking God's will for my life and asking if I may serve him as a gospel bass singer and singer of harmonies in that form of music! I thank Holy God for my voice! Near perfect pitch as well, guidance for my fingers on that piano, AMEN
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 Posted: Mon Jan 21st, 2019 09:20 pm
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Joined: Thu May 17th, 2007
Location: Stratford, Australia
Posts: 6887
Favorite Artist: James Taylor, Cat Stevens, Joni Mitchell
I am a: Songwriter/Musician
I like the structure of this, Marty. It has a strong rhythm and flow to it. And as well as the joyful message there is a sense of formality to it that lends it strength.

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 Posted: Sun Jan 27th, 2019 04:30 pm
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Joined: Tue Feb 20th, 2018
Location: Hull, United Kingdom
Posts: 197
Favorite Artist: Liam Gallagher, The Courteneers
I am a: Singer/Songwriter/Musician
Some great rhymes and phrases mate.

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 Posted: Sun Feb 24th, 2019 02:16 am
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Joined: Thu Mar 22nd, 2018
Location: Eugene, Oregon USA
Posts: 299
Favorite Artist: Randy Travis, Garth Brooks, The Monkees, The Beatles, Santana, 3 ...
I am a: Singer/Songwriter
Great rhymes. "Then" should be deleted in last line for smooth flow. "For if you fully trust Christ our Lord, you (or ye) shall never die."

Last edited on Sun Feb 24th, 2019 02:21 am by SongWriterJoe

"I'm not sure if my heart is in my music - or my music is in my heart!"
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 Posted: Tue Mar 5th, 2019 11:02 pm
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Joined: Tue Nov 27th, 2018
Location: Poughkeepsie, New York USA
Posts: 2019
Favorite Artist: Queen, Tom Petty, Metallica, Kansas, Guns N' Roses
I am a: Songwriter
I always enjoy your joyful lyrics. I really love the last verse :)

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