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 Posted: Fri Dec 28th, 2018 12:45 pm
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Marty Ray Boone
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A record up in heaven called
the book of life above
For every saint of Holy God
who reached out to his love

The blood of precious Jesus
who had washed their sins away
Provides eternal life to them
A home for them to stay

For every one who's name's not there
who does not know my Lord
Eternally shall then be damned
Not be in one accord

For only loving Jesus
can write names in that dear book
Of those who had just turned away
And every sin forsook!

When Jesus comes in rapture
the age of grace shall end
And then comes sudden judgment
For unbelievers then

Who trusted not in Jesus
to wash their sins away
An anti-Christ deceives them
And steals their souls away!

A time will come when judgment
shall fill the Earth below
And millions of lost people
To hell will someday go

For when believing Christians
with Christ shall fly away
the Earth then knows the judgment
damnation in that day

So now as you have time I ask
Will you reach out to Christ?
To write your name upon the book
The book that will suffice

To seal your fate eternally
To live with God above
The author of eternal life
The God of endless love!

copyright Friday, December 28th, 2018

I believe that this is the first gospel song here about the book of life found in heaven!



:)

Last edited on Fri Dec 28th, 2018 09:12 pm by Marty Ray Boone



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 Posted: Fri Dec 28th, 2018 07:15 pm
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RainyDayMan
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The book of life is a great theme for a gospel song. I don't remember seeing one posted here about it either.

The structure feels tight and the rhyming is consistent.

A couple of minor sugs:
who do not know my Lord > who does not know my Lord

Who had not trusted Jesus > Who trusted not in Jesus

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 Posted: Fri Dec 28th, 2018 08:35 pm
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Andrea
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Spot on Marty. This is really good.

I love this:

Who had not trusted Jesus
to wash their sins away
An anti-Christ deceives them
And steals their souls away!

The end is wonderful. I love God as the author of eternal love. Nice!



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 Posted: Thu Jan 3rd, 2019 12:42 am
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M.P. Dudash
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Marty this is good. Probably my favorite gospel tune of yours, nice work.



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 Posted: Wed Mar 13th, 2019 11:26 pm
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This is great.. one of your best!! 'Does' needs to be 'do' though, grammatically. You go, son!

For every one who's name's not there
who does not know my Lord

("For every one who's name's not there
who do not know my Lord")

Last edited on Wed Mar 13th, 2019 11:34 pm by SongWriterJoe



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