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 Posted: Mon Feb 17th, 2020 05:36 pm
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Yep. But hit.... would stay hit....if I remember the Prozedere of this cellphone translators right. But as long as u don’t steal anything...and post the original writers and their copyright....there should be trouble hu?
I love your eyes azure blue...fishermen reference and ...out are you....yeah that was fun....😂



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 Posted: Tue Feb 18th, 2020 12:12 am
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Hey Joe, I saw your post and it made me think about our co-write. I know we didn't finish and maybe you were not happy with what we had, but I still like it. Maybe we can revisit (I made a few new changes). It was yours to begin with, so it is your call.

In any case, I enjoyed working together.

The Dogs of War

Man is so confusing
He bears a bitter shame
Creating deadly armies
in justice's so-called name

safe and sound
behind their desks
the leaders
take their stand

deploying
sons and daughters
who serve under
militant command

Fierce and strong
the soldiers stand
trained to protect
the mother land

Chorus
No compromise is possible
For the wounded
and the dead

A life cut short
and laid to rest
a gravestone at their head

The waste of war
tallied from afar
so each side knows the score

We humbly pray, Almighty God
for the day we hear no more
the soul consuming battle cry
"cry havoc, set free the dogs of war"

War, a tool of evil
It's such a bitter shame
Each side the mortal enemy
Nobody wins this game

violence ends
when one side seizes
the power
and control

A match of
wins and losses
a wager branded
on every soldier's soul

Somewhere
down the line
history repeats
resuming the same goal

Chorus (as above)
No compromise is possible
For the wounded
and the dead

A life cut short
and laid to rest
a gravestone at their head

The waste of war
tallied from afar
so each side knows the score

We humbly pray, Almighty God
for the day we hear no more
the soul consuming battle cry
"cry havoc, set free the dogs of war"

(repeat to fade)
"cry havoc, set free the dogs of war"



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