Beatles, Pink Floyd, Leadbelly, Nirvana, REM, Leonard Cohen, Robert Johnson
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So happy that you found yourself a band. It's sounds good. Is that you singing? I've always liked your lyrics. Music sounds really cool. I like the little hook you do right before the chorus. That is the kind of thing that grabs people's attention.
Great job Khalysha!
____________________ Here is my YouTube and SoundCloud page with some of my original music.
You've a really strong mood/style/sound going on here, and the vocal is great.
For me, the lyric is fine, but the music is better.
I second Sam's comment on the riff before the chorus, that works especially well.
This feels like it could go somewhere.
____________________ Marty Ray Boone, now seeking God's will for my life and asking if I may serve him as a gospel bass singer and singer of harmonies in that form of music! I thank Holy God for my voice! Near perfect pitch as well, guidance for my fingers on that piano, AMEN