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a song for a friend
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 Posted: Mon Nov 5th, 2018 04:02 pm
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tjrtu
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I want to make a song for a friend.I include myself too because we have something in common, and that is struggling wit society.She has been bullied by her look and nation, and they have been laughing to me cuz i was really weird and that was so painful but I want to tell my friend that both of us don't need to care and we both should be happy because of who we are.

and the problem is, as you can see, that my English is not that good, but I'll try to improve that myself, just saying.

here is the begining:
They say I'm too weird
They think I'm just scared (it's because I was fighting against that kind of "buylling",I'm saying that because I think I should put some lyrics here about my "fighting")
I'm not gonna show anything
I'm just gonna play my own thing

(maybe some lyrics here)

We've come a heavy road
We've come a long way
we are different
And the same

chorus
And I will ...
...


and some rap part which includes:
Doesn't matter where you're from
Doesn't matter how you look
Doesn't matter ...

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 Posted: Mon Nov 5th, 2018 09:18 pm
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A good start!

Songs that come from the heart usually have an intensity and passion to them, and I expect yours will be the same.

I like:
we are different
And the same


and also:
We've come a heavy road

You might try:
I'm just gonna play my own thing > I'm just gonna do my own thing

It's early days yet, but keep going!

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 Posted: Tue Nov 6th, 2018 01:29 pm
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Marty Ray Boone
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RainyDayMan wrote:
A good start!

Songs that come from the heart usually have an intensity and passion to them, and I expect yours will be the same.

I like:
we are different
And the same


and also:
We've come a heavy road

You might try:
I'm just gonna play my own thing > I'm just gonna do my own thing

It's early days yet, but keep going!
Keep working on it! I am sure that the words will come to mind. Where are you from? Hope you learn English well. :cool:



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