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WHEN? a second draft of a rap song wanting criticism!
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 Posted: Thu Oct 11th, 2018 04:59 am
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VagabondVibes
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* Lyric removed.

Last edited on Thu Oct 11th, 2018 11:28 pm by RainyDayMan



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 Posted: Thu Oct 11th, 2018 11:30 pm
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Sorry Vagabond Vibes, but songs depicting or promoting drug use aren't acceptable on TSF. We aim to be family friendly here.

This is not a comment on the quality of your lyric, or its relevance to modern society.

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 Posted: Sat Oct 13th, 2018 01:37 pm
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PM me and I'll give you an offline review on the QT. (hush, hush)

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PS --- Check out my song: Who Ya Gonna Call, Big Daddy?
https://soundcloud.com/user-426611522

Last edited on Sat Oct 13th, 2018 01:39 pm by Motorist Sketchbook



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