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 Posted: Sat Sep 29th, 2018 07:02 pm
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Deep soul, warm heart
© 2018 Alan Evans / Owen Hovenden

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I got a deep soul and a warm heart
looking for someone who won't rip it apart
I gotta soft touch for the right girl
a mountain of love saved in my little world

got plenty of love for the one who's true
no lies or games could it be you
no time to wait or hesitate
if you need time to think then you're too late

I got a deep soul and a warm heart
looking for someone who won't rip it apart
I gotta soft touch for the right girl
a mountain of love saved in my little world

looking for someone with a pure heart
wore mine on my sleeve got it ripped apart
now I need one who's sweet and true
I'm hoping this time it won't leave me blue

I got a deep soul and a warm heart
looking for someone who won't rip it apart
I gotta soft touch for the right girl
a mountain of love saved in my little world



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Short and sweet. Nice.
What do you hear for musical style on this?
I know it's under alternative rock.
But slow or fast, loud or soft?
Maybe medium medium? lol

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pointer sisters slow hand type tune



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This flows really nicely, and certainly fits the description you gave for the music. I can easily imagine it done in that style. Starting on the chorus works for it too. I'm thinking you'll need a good singer to do it justice though! Good stuff :)

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Thanks for looking.



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Now with music! :)

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Wow! What a pleasant surprise this morning to find this song from Seamus set to music by our musical genius on the forum! Mister Owen Hovenden does an excellent job at giving our lyrics their musical legs. And Owen does it all on the very first take. That is proof that he is just so prolific! His talent greatly abounds! And you Seamus write songs that flow rhythmically so Owen can make a true gem! Congratulations to the both of you my good friends. :cool:

Last edited on Fri Oct 5th, 2018 07:10 pm by Marty Ray Boone



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Recorded track ALERT: Link near the top of the first panel.

RainyDayMan wrote: Now with music! :)
Awesome song, guys.

I like what you have done with this, RDM.
I was preparing to complain about the need for a guitar solo.
But there it was near the end. Nicely done.
Good guitar work throughout, really. Kudos.

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Sorry guys... I'm new here. How am I able to hear your work?

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Just above the lyrics it says link to music.



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Just click up there on where it says link to music!:shock:



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Thanks guys. That's great.

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Thanks guys :) Alan made it pretty easy to do this one with his description of what he was looking for.

@Steve, yes it needed a lead guitar solo. I've put one in there, but it's not really my strength.

And as I thought, it really needs a better singer to do it justice! But otherwise I'm happy with the way it came out.

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Should have read the description. When I started listening I was thinking, damn.. that sounds like Owen singing. Anyways, great song guys. Really like the groovy vibe.



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Nice job Owen



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Thanks Alan. Yours is the most important feedback!

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Gracias



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hey man just post song :cool:



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? I don't understand the comment Pat. Link to the song is already posted in the first entry.

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Some of these people are dumb! Just click on the words: "link to music" simple as that!:shock:



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