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 Posted: Tue Sep 25th, 2018 11:23 am
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Marty Ray Boone
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Dream of Jesus, his great love for you
No other power will ever do
What the master offers on Earth below
Make him your Savior and then in him grow
Mature in the spirit,with great lamb of God
As you walk here humbly, on this Earth to trod

He'll mend broken hearts, make you whole and new
No limits on Christ and all he can do
He layed down his life on Calvary
Gives eternal life, yes, for you and me
I now lift him up for the whole World to see
Soon he will be coming for those who believe

Let Jesus now fill you with his joy divine
I treasure the day that I did make him mine!
Praise our dear God, Father, and Jesus his Son
Be filled with his spirit, the blessed three in one
They're "LIVE" now in heaven, God's grace to bestow
He'll lift you from sorrow, his joy soon will flow

His blessed Holy Spirit guides as I write songs
directly from heaven to him I belong
Eternally grateful for what they have done
All praise to our master for Jesus his Son
For God's in three persons in heaven above
Great God and King Jesus, and heavenly Dove

I am now rejoicing for soon we shall see
Our master and Savior a'coming for me
And you too my friend, if in him you do trust
He's reaching out to you, so I say we must
For no other power can give victory
O'er World, flesh, and devil but the trinity

Amen to our Father, Amen to his Son
The blessed Holy Spirit, the great three in one
What more can I say dear friend unto thee
Reach out now to Jesus who died on that tree!

Copyright, Tuesday, September 25th, 2018. A suggestion was made for change in wording, so I editted to make it read as was suggested! It may possibly now be just right! Amen. I am always open to suggestions for improving one of my songs! ;)

Last edited on Tue Sep 25th, 2018 01:53 pm by Marty Ray Boone



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 Posted: Tue Sep 25th, 2018 12:01 pm
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M.P. Dudash
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Marty, I must say I can actually pick out how I think this song should be sang. For me reading other people's lyrics that usually doesn't happen, nice job. One change, that I think it might read/sing easier. Praise dear God our Father and Jesus his Son. Maybe to- Praise our dear God, Father, Jesus his Son. Possibly add an and before Jesus his Son if needed for syllable count. Other than that, nice work!



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 Posted: Tue Sep 25th, 2018 01:35 pm
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Marty Ray Boone
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I just read it back! It does say "and" Jesus his Son. You need to look it over again! :cool:



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 Posted: Tue Sep 25th, 2018 01:49 pm
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Marty Ray Boone
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Oops, I just read what you said! I will edit to make it as you suggested! :)



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 Posted: Tue Sep 25th, 2018 11:06 pm
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Nice to see another song lyric from you Marty. Your faith always shines through :)

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