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Queen of hearts
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 Posted: Wed Aug 8th, 2018 09:18 am
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yeah, it's been a long time coming
yet you were there all of the time
in my eyes you were always the prize
so happy that you're mine

my face is alight with pure delight
when your name shows on my phone
can't hide my smile even for a while
has we talk for hours alone

love to hear your voice has you say hello
as the echoes and crackles disappear
the tones of you come right through
you're the one I want to hear

my heart beats through my chest
with the excitement you bring to my day
just one little call and you cause me to fall
in love with you more each day

I can't fail to win my chips are all in
I'm hoping the dealer dealt me a good one
it's a great start the cards are all hearts
and he's telling me it's you that I've won

gamblers say, never check winnings at the table
but I have to make sure so I turn to see
the speed of my heart as my queen of hearts
is standing looking back at me


Last edited on Wed Aug 8th, 2018 01:17 pm by Seamus

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 Posted: Mon Aug 13th, 2018 04:53 pm
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Joined: Tue Jan 23rd, 2018
Location: Texas USA
Posts: 125
Favorite Artist: Mickey Newberry
I am a: Singer/Songwriter
Man... this could be worked into an awesome tune. Too bad Kenny Rogers retired. It needs a little work and a chorus that wraps it all up. Great start.

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