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 Posted: Sat Mar 31st, 2018 07:15 pm
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Adrenaline
C.A.M
3/30/18

Bring the pain bring the shame
Can't make me tame
I don't care i just want adrenaline
Bring the sticks bring the stones
Break my bones
I dont care im here for adrenaline

Don't let me in keep your doors locked
I'm just in it for the drama
I'll break your heart give me all the bad karma
Cause my pulse runs quicker
When you swear at me
And I always cum quicker
When i'm bleeding you see

So i break all the little hearts i can
To get all their emotional adrenaline
And i swear i'll never go near you again
If you give me all your emotional adrenaline
But im lying cause by the end of the week you know i'll be trying
To tap that well and get all that water hahaha

Cause my pulse runs quicker
when you swear at me
And I always cum quicker
When i'm bleeding you see

Bring the pain bring the shame
Can't make me tame
I don't care i just want adrenaline
Bring the sticks bring the stones
Break my bones
I dont care im here for adrenaline

Well my ship is sinking and it's fueled by hate
So give me a slap to the face
And save me from that fate
Chances are i'll bring you down with me
But maybe we’ll find
That you like it just as much
And then i'll slip out at night
Cause
I aint looking for a ride or die
I'm just looking to almost die
Chain me up and bleed my wrists dry
Leave me there so I can get off
Before the E.M.T’s arrive

Don't be scared by all the haters
You know I love to swim with gators
I run barefoot through the glass
I go die hard on their ass
HO HO HO mother ****ers
Here comes the truth
I'll keep bringing you gifts
So you can keep bringing the abuse
Talk ***, make it dirty
Eat ***, you're only being flirty with me
Your making my heart flutter
You're fueling my adrenaline

Bring the pain bring the shame
Can't make me tame
I don't care I just want adrenaline
Bring the sticks bring the stones
Break my bones
I dont care im here for adrenaline

Cause my pulse runs quicker
When you swear at me
And I always cum quicker
When i'm bleeding you see...

Last edited on Tue Apr 3rd, 2018 04:59 pm by C.A.M

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 Posted: Sat Mar 31st, 2018 11:10 pm
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Feels heavy to me. Rock or even metal maybe?



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 Posted: Mon Apr 2nd, 2018 12:09 am
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I think your right MR. RAINY DAY, sounds more rock/metal. Thanks!

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 Posted: Tue Apr 3rd, 2018 05:00 pm
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Just added a new verse! Hope ya like it

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 Posted: Thu Apr 5th, 2018 11:08 pm
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Yup, I too think this is a Metal Song. I can almost imagine a little bit of screamo in parts too! I like It:)



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 Posted: Sat Apr 14th, 2018 10:09 pm
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thanks billy, ya it could be. we shall have to see what it hashes out to.

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