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A Summer Place- Demo
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 Posted: Tue Feb 13th, 2018 05:05 pm
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 Posted: Wed Feb 14th, 2018 12:02 am
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That came out nicely! I think they got that dreamy, nostalgic feeling right. They've made the tempo a little slower than I had imagined, but it works. I like the dynamic lift into the chorus too. Very good. :)

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 Posted: Wed Feb 14th, 2018 07:58 pm
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Thanks for all your help RainyDayMan- You are good in what you do!!!!!!!!



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 Posted: Sun Feb 18th, 2018 07:27 pm
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Wasn't sure of the lyrics when I read them, but the end result is very nice! Good job!



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 Posted: Mon Feb 19th, 2018 05:47 pm
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Thanks M. P. Shaudd for your help on previous revisions on my song
Your comments and suggestions helped immensely



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