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Should I change the middle 8 & give it a guitar solo instead?
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 Posted: Thu Dec 21st, 2017 09:05 am
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As per the title! Should we add a solo & take a way the vocals for the middle 8 or keep as it is?

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 Posted: Fri Dec 22nd, 2017 02:05 am
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I think you are referring to the repeated "What you've left behind" lines?
I found those a little bland. I think it would help to have something different there to break it up. A guitar solo should work, or if you want vocals, change the melody at that point before returning back to it to bring it home.

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