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 Posted: Mon Dec 4th, 2017 10:32 pm
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A_Towner
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https://soundcloud.com/thatdamnalex/snoflake

lyrics:
oh my little snoflake I'm looking for you
Sick of the sunlight. Too warm for frostbite
The glass not easy to see through
Still I think I can see you

Oh my little snoflake the nights are so long
Stuck in a daydream, always the same thing
A stones throw from the palm trees
Wondering if she still loves me

Chorus- do do do do do

Think its kind of funny I torture myself
look at her pictures, the times I kissed her
A book I can't seem to put down
A tune I can't seem to drown out

(instrumental)

A beacon leading to nowhere
Man the nights are so cold there

Chorus-

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its more of a poppy song. written two or 3 years ago

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 Posted: Thu Dec 7th, 2017 06:40 am
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That is fun. I like it! Pretty dramatic change in tone from the verses to the chorus! I'm glad you revert back though.
Nice!

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 Posted: Tue Dec 12th, 2017 12:45 pm
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Words that come to mind - catchy, groovy, quirky, Beatle-esque, fun!

The harmonies are sweet, and I like the heavy choruses.

Enjoyed it!

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 Posted: Mon Jan 22nd, 2018 04:49 am
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Lovin' Spoonful. . .
Or should I say Cupfull? LOL

Groovy tune. Catchy riff.
The chorus is a bit harsh and seems out of place.
Starts out like you're swingin' in a hammock
and then a Nascar race comes right through your yard. HA

I would DEF tone that down.

Good sound and overall vibe though.

KEEP ON ROCKIN'!

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