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A Summer Place
 Moderated by: Troy33, RainyDayMan, HankTheTank
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 Posted: Tue Oct 3rd, 2017 07:59 pm
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Whenever winter brings the
first freeze
and the sun brings a
summer tease
I sit in the shadows
thinking about that song.
A summer place
somewhere only we know.

When I close my eyes
I think about you
I think about sixteen
I think about that first dance
feet in the sand
moving deeper and deeper
making a forever memory of love

I get high on a memory
high on a memory
I get high on a memory of you
a memory of you
strange how a song
sounds like a memory
like a recording of
a summer's day
on that beach
somewhere only we know.

Not finished

Last edited on Tue Oct 3rd, 2017 08:00 pm by wkamen

Bill Kamen
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 Posted: Tue Oct 3rd, 2017 10:01 pm
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I can't pick the rhythm of this one yet. I can see you're still working on the lyric, but do you have a melody in mind? Might need to hear something before I can suggest anything helpful.

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