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A Summer Place
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 Posted: Tue Oct 3rd, 2017 07:59 pm
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wkamen
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When the summer had left
and the winter came
There were days
when the breeze was so cold-hearted
and the sun was so heartless
That my body lay bare
to a memory
and I think about that song
I think about you
and get high on a memory
a memory of you


Strange how a song
sounds like a memory
like a recording of
a summer's day
on that beach
somewhere only we know.


in process

Last edited on Mon Dec 4th, 2017 04:27 pm by wkamen



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 Posted: Tue Oct 3rd, 2017 10:01 pm
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I can't pick the rhythm of this one yet. I can see you're still working on the lyric, but do you have a melody in mind? Might need to hear something before I can suggest anything helpful.

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