SO im working on a new song and i need your feedback on the song structure, only the first verse is written in terms of Lyrics (added below), drums are made with "addictive drums", everything is a demo.
I've cut and cut the song into different forms and at this point i think im Overthinking everything, in any case, when you listen, does it make sense or not.
Well, so far so good. The overall vibe is cool. There's a lot of variety in there but at this point I can't say if that's good or bad. My suggestion would be to try and get a full version down. Then see if it hangs together or feels disjointed.
I can't really tell in which parts you plan to have vocals vs instrumental so it's tricky to comment on that.
The current vocals are fairly quick and staccato so you may want to vary that with some longer drawn out vocals for a chorus / break.